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Nice chapter hat.
Another chapter so soon for this story? Uncalled for, but certainly not unwanted. Ah, the wonders of a bond like love can do for our little Jason. I always felt that love was a scary emotion. It makes people do the craziest of things, but it is also powerful enough to stop that very same crazy stunt.
Could be worse: she could have been wearing cycling pants.
I'm starting to wonder if Cosmic and Dust's personalities are actually two parts of a whole. Maybe the blade did more than just split their body, but those side effects took a while to pop up?
5206593 That's what I was partially thinking once they were separated again. Perhaps once they do come back together, both Dust and Cosmic will either die off or merge into one normal pony before she was beheaded in the first place.
If Dust and Cosmic were voiced, what would they sound like?
'Twas a nice chapter, but I noticed that you're beginning to use ellipses just a tad too much. There are a couple places in the chapter where a comma would have had the same effect as the ellipse and is more proper to use.
Also, apologies on taking so long with the editing, but the TF2 2014 Scream Fortress update came out and I've been distracted by how upset I am about the new Halloween cosmetics are being distributed.
I wonder how he'll survive if both Cosmic and Dust become two seperate, but whole ponies.
There I commented, happy? Also you need to add a hat to your profile picture. Just Photoshop a big top hat into your profile pic.
That has got to be one of the most adorable images portrayed in written form ever.
I'm not sure what to say other than it was an enjoyable chapter even if I didn't get some of the lingo but that's more on my military ignorance.
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Dust I based off this chick,
I know it's odd, but they just have a very clean grasp of the English language, but it's just sweet enough to hit the ear pleasingly with a bit of sharpness to the words.
Cosmic, fiery, half Irish half English accent with a medium pitch.
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You fools
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U mada faka u!
Finally, I wanted to smack Jason upside the head if he kept pitying himself!
...Is this a reference?
5209169 Probably a reference to one of the older chapters.
5209344 Did you check the link?
5209917 I did and it still flew over my head, derp.
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>Survive
Ha...
You are surely fast writer.
This is soo good!
I hate Dust. The dialog you wrote for her, her attitude, I can't stop thinking of here as some fucked up mix of "spoiled little princess" with "overly attached girlfriend". And Jason's an idiot that he don't see this. Or maybe he does but is too fucked up to do something about it.
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What? You think I'm going to say anything?
Silly writer. You get cookie instead.
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Nvm, you get a pinkie
Jason is/was acting like a huge douche. He needs to pull his head out of his ass.
Fool! Only a fool says fool like a fool!
5315161 considering he can actually put it there now, that's a very literal possibility.
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HA! You fool! You fell right into his trap! Witness now the folly of your follies!
Damnit. Now I want to see O'Malley stuck in Pinkie's head. If he thought he hated Caboose...
can't believe I missed this line last time I read this.