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That reaction at the end, is priceless.
Whut?
Hat.... wtf.... seriously dude.... now my brain hurts trying to process this shit. Stop! Still loving it though.
Not so sure about this. I mean, it would be a different Cosmic still, without the memories and bonding and stuff...plus the Cosmic we know will still "die" if Dust is chosen to be the dominant half when they fuse...whatever, it's your story. I'll wait for what you decide to do. Just hope it comes out well, that's all. I really like this story. I have complete faith in your decisions, Sir Hat.
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I'll make it work, trust me.
Major spoiler, but you know you want it.....
Alicorn twins are best twins
5216699 You know, I don't even know why I gotten so worried. You're one of my favorite authors on this whole site, and personally one of the best in my book. I don't even know why I commented that last post. I feel silly and stupid for doubting you.
That spoiler is best spoiler
I shall happily await what you'll be cooking up.
Okay, could you do a recap chapter?
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Inter dimensional musical chairs
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When did Celestia get a mate? Did I miss a story? Totally valid question with how many stories you've published
I have no idea what's going on right now. I don't think I'm going to have an idea what's going on. I don't think I even mind. Continue!
I have a feeling we're gonna see a fic about Celestia and her 'mate.'
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I think I've got it. Celestia showed up to ask what he knew about his mask. She having a mate with a similar mask is a reference to Sir Hat's other story with the changeling satyr. "Unwanted" I think. I remember her mate in that story saying that he came from a bad, wartorn place, though I thought it was just a battlefield and not the world.
Now, in this story, apparently something is going to be done about multiple human worlds linking to Equestria.
This chapter feels like something Dan_S Comments would write; the exposition is enough to tell you what is happening, but not so much that you understand why.
Also, Sir Hat, you need to expand your human characterization. Just my opinion.
5217496 THANK YOU!!!
With little to no clarification from the author to officialise, I wil accept this.
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in the research lab in the frozen north where cosmic dust worked, they found a dead version of him that was somehow affecting him
I'm guessing that, being the same person, the two versions of him were merging, and since one was dead, he was dying too.
I was initially thinking that he'd find a recently dead cosmic dust, cut her head off and fuse each part with cosmic and dust to give them each a whole body, now that I think about it, the mere presence of a live cosmic dust might cause all three to merge into one, two, or three mares that are complete with no one dying
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Guys...all the Hat-verse stories are connected, remember? Celestia's mate is Able from Five Days, The Choice, Unwanted, etc.
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Link to Celestia's story
And basically, dimensional hopping will kill you if you do it to often and in a strange pattern. You can jump from the world you were born in, but if you jump from a second world you'll start to die. Stormside: the place Cosmic worked, and the place studying immortality and dimensional hopping and all sorts of good stuff, had a bunch of secrets, which gave Jason the idea (If there was another one of me, then there's another version of Cosmic.)
I was going to leave this blank, for Jason to explain next chapter, but I confused yall.
Sir hat! I literally made an account just to tell you I love your story. o.o Now, keep it up, because I'll love you for it.
5219811 kinda surprised Able didn't hit him lol. Also this is set after the choice, but before unwanted anomaly, which is set like 25 years after Able came to Equestria... Right?
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Pretty much. This is right after the choice.
Timeline
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>Expand human characterization
I have been. Just because people don't read the stories with the Jersey boy, or the frustrated radio host, or the Dour Slav or the jumpy Prance man, doesn't mean they're not their.
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That comment was spurred by the remarkably similar speaking styles of headless man and Celestia-mate. And then thinking about Cosmic, changeling satyr, several of the Fetlock ponies and the human there, etc.
Though I will say that Celestia immediately struck me as a very different style of character.
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Jason and Able (Celestia's mate) are both soldiers. Jason's a bit more settled in with life than Able, and isn't quite as (Angry)
Misery from Unwanted is 19, she's emotional and all over the place, and Cosmic is Jason with a bit of sass, and a perverted swing.
Fetlock is still in beta stages, so characters are still going to be fleshed out as we go.
Literally w0t?
and then i read comments
if your readers have to read previous stories to understand what is going on, you might want to consider specifying that in the story description. Or not, I guess.
I am so goddamned lost right now. I feel like just I read two halves of two different conversations taken from some other story.