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well the universe is doomed, able is now immortal. pack your bags folks!
Able is immortal....that explains a lot.
5246121 Right behind yah!
Really wish you hadn't put Able in this one. The dude has no redeeming traits. He has no personality other than being an ass. Seriously, that's all he does.
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at least we can pick at least 1 new universe to live in, lets make it count!
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I'm working on it! I got through the grit after The Choice, now I gotta hammer out his relationship with his kid and Luna (AKA people he doesn't feel bitter hate against)
oh...my...i cant feel my sides! HELP!
Omg I've never laughed so hard from any story in my life. this is friggin hilarious! LOVE IT!
10 OUT OF 10 MOUSTACHE!
5246214 poke.
I am now waiting for Dust to cut off his cock with the blade and using it on him like a strap-on.
Oh gods, she's one step away from becoming a yaoi fangirl...
Gods help us if she ever discovers that dark fandom
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>Implying she's not already
5248283 Then may the gods take pity on Jason's soul...
Who the hell is Able? What did I miss? When did this fight happen? And really, even if for a good reason, the moment you go to attack someone you should pretty much expect you're going to die - they do have to defend themselves with whatever they have on hand.
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(Not the first story with him, but all the stories are linked either as sequels or prequels)
So far, Jason has not a damn thing to apologise for and this Able fucknut is a violent douche. So he kissed Celly on the lips, so fucking what? It's not like he shoved his dick up her ass and started to yodel 'God Save the Queen.' And actually, I can't see Celly with this waste of flesh anyway.
I'm sorry. The original idea is fun and though I think both these idiots need a good smack upside the head (well, three - Dust, Cosmic and Jason), it hasn't been too much groan-inducing stupidity. But now ... I don't know if I can stomach MORE teenagers-in-adult-form.
Oh, and 5249804? This particular story isn't marked as either a sequel or prequel as far as I can see. I actually thought it was stand alone until I saw all these comments. And then I looked at what this all references and found a huge bag of NOPE I thought I'd lost. I hope this 'Able' thing ends quickly and I can read the story I came here to read instead of feeling entirely out of the loop because I didn't read the fourteen backstory pieces about this douchenoozle guy I already want to drop-kick into orbit.
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Able was a one time thing. Now it's back to sorting out heads and getting everyone back together.
Is Able immortal now?
Did Celestia bring him along, just so that could happen?
/rant Also this is only my opinion and I'd rather be honest if a little blunt rather than just stop reading the story in the future and the author has no idea why. Maybe I'm the only person with is this opinion and that is cool and maybe I'm not, who knows, not me. I'm just that guy with the 10 page opinion piece.
From a PoV of someone who has only read this one story of yours and was not advised to read any others this story is getting more and more convoluted with no seeming end, direction rhyme or reason. It jumps from one thing to another.
I'm sorry but the last two chapters just feels like an incredible mistake. Even if this story was correctly referenced as a sequel and pre-sequel or whatever the way you introduced Able into this story was so far left field you might as well have been on the bloody moon. To me it just felt like "Hmm, I need an idea for more story, LET'S CUT UP ABLE!" rather than even building up to or referencing able in any fashion before hand in this story he just suddenly *is* and oh look, we are also cutting him up now.
I really hate to say this but this is starting to feel like another case of a never ending story by which I mean the plot will go wherever it wants for any reason just to add a little progression. Especially with this particular chapter a story which felt like it was heading towards a goal suddenly feels like it is heading nowhere. Another kind of story that seems to suffer from this terribly is baby stories, Where the author seems to run out of plot ideas and introduces another baby. Especially those stories where an adult turns into a baby.
Please don't turn into one of those stories, I've quite like the interactions between the '3' characters in this story so far.
Oh look, it's Sir Swears-A-Lot.
I didn't even like him in his own story.
So all humans are zombies in this story?
So, this is the chapter that everyone hate?
Count me in. This is yellow press-tier bullshit.
5265969 Nah, just the ones hit by the Unholy Guillotine of Modular Separation.
Wow Celestia, you can sure pick them...