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This chapter seemed a bit more spastic than most.
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It is. It's just to highlight how flustered Dust makes our main man (buzz lightyear) Jason.
Wow, I'm not even sure what's going on with him anymore.
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He can handle Cosmic's surly lifestyle, the yelling, all of it. But when faced with a pretty mare and unconditional love he freaks out.
5203574 Yeah, unconditional love is hard to swallow most of the time.
5203574 That's just it though. I mean, why does he behave that way? Is he not familiar with that approach of affection and is scared that it's some kind of trap? Has he been in a past relationship that something like this happened? I mean there's being modest, but then there's just... Whatever's going on with Jason here.
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He's just not used to it, and seeing that amount of love towards him without anything in return does make him feel like there's something going on. There are a bunch of reasons, but the drastic change between Cosmic's approach and Dust's approach plays a big factor.
Holy...Dust really is aggressive. I can understand his defeatist mindset, since it's similar to my own. I would act the same way. But Dust...hot damn, she's really something else.
5203664 I had a bad thought to this comment
So they sat their disembodied heads down while their disenheaded bodies had silent, passionate sex in another room.
Am I reading the situation correctly?
5203686 I guess that makes sense.
5203852 "Passionate"
But yes, I just wouldn't call it passionate.
So yeah. Randomly find a neat sounding story, click it, read it three hours later I am typing a message saying that this is awesome. Odd kinky decapitated sex moments aside, freakin neat story you have here. Kinda confused on the whole "humans are normal" thing, but in all honesty, don't care really. Favorite bits so far have to be the character interactions, and how screwed up the three of em are. If/When they both have a full body, I can only imagine the very odd, very kinky three way sex could be, especially with what will probably closely resemble twins.
Never been a fan on the ponyxhuman thing. Dunno, weirds me out some. Anyways, I think you did it well regardless, so high fives to you, good sir. Thank you and have a great night.
I get the feeling Dust is trying to... motivate him into dominating her.
...I get the feeling that I'd understand so much more if I'd been in a relationship.
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Well, one that didn't end after the second date with me being told I'd never have a chance unless I dyed my hair.
5204228 I don't know, she sounds very dominating herself. I think either way would be pretty interesting.
Lucky basterd wish i was him
Holy crap this chapter is awesome
5203828 My work here is done.
I think I like Dust a bit more than Cosmic now
This is sexual torture in the best way! Great job!
I don't like Dust. She seems like an ass a bit, the one that toys with others for her own pleasure. Like school cheerleader. Cute and sweet, but she'll force you to lick dog shit of her boots.
Holy shit. Anyone else get a boner from that? damn Dust you some kind of freak!
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And I like it?
Fuckin- I'm trying to drink some Eggnog here! Stahp, this doesn't help!
Old chapter, I know, catching up. But I need to say this, and I don't say this often but that? That was fucking hot.
... ... I think I need a new pair of boxers.
"Oh my god, My dick hurts!" Best closer ever!
no u