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This chapter confused the hell out of me. I got lost more times than once, and had to reread to find where I was again, just because this chapter was so bloody random!
Don't have her head re-attach.
It would be more interesting if it didn't.
You MIGHT get away with letting her body regain it' connection to her in the sense that it's no longer Cosmic, head and Dust, body, but becomes Cosmic Dust, separated head and body.
4641260 I just thought of as filler.
Kinda hinting towards development but most likely just there to tease before the best meats is are presented.
Is this one of the Normal Equestria trains the are on? Because if it is, they are dumb. They could have gotten one of the crystal empire trains. One of those things could probably make short work of getting through the snow and ice.
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Indeed. It was just a way to get them to the sciency magicy goodness that created the severed head to begin with.
And...it was just in a train car. The whole thing was just a chat in a train car.
Yep Cosmic is best OC pony
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I figured it was the chat in the train, but the chatting between them went all over the damn place. I felt like I was having the conversation!
The only down side to this adventure is if 'time' fucks with her. Hopeful, it will just start from before her head was cut off.
Another good chapter!
Tsundere head is best head.
Your description of her acts of pedophilic rape disturbed me but I guess those kind of things happened long ago when morals where a lot looser.
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She never raped colts. She's making a reference to young stallions in the army, expecting a quick lay and getting...something more.
I wonder what happens to Dust if cosmic gets attached to her again, does she 'die' her personality wouldn't be able to do anything, would it?
Little worried about our protagonist bleeding every so often.
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Not sure it was pedophilic, as such, It's more like boning college kids. They're old enough to be legal, but young enough to not know that they have no control over the situation.
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Nothing in this story even hinted about pedophilia. The fact you think it does is telling and disturbing.
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Definitely in full agreement there.
4641848 The girl gives you an uneasy look, as if that of a man who has to tell his mentally dysfunctional daughter that she'll never accomplish her dreams of becoming a master ballerina.
4641848 Morales looser, old times, you seriously dont know history do you, what she is talking about would be more equivalent to around the early 1900s or late 1800s, by comparison to our world which would mean the morales are stricter, its just that back then, rape was easier to get away with.
is this the sound he's making?
(2 minutes 22 seconds, can't get it to start there for some reason)
I wonder if there a limit to a ponies one can love?
This is surely my strangest love of all, thanks ponyfuckers for all of this, if i can live another live i would live it with all of you.
>> Magnafox
You should read the Bernd und Rachel un Unteralterbach
It will cure you, maybe.
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Right up until she bites down, anyway.