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oddly... It's sort of romantic. I look forward to seeing how this will turn out.
...Well then.
I don't know if I could do it... Not after what had just happened. And I mean everything, not just the one thing.
Approved
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not bad, now their feelings are out in the open properly
A classic love line ;D
Bout time.
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I thought about adding Jason's retort, but I figured,
"Not with a mouthful of cum," would have been a bit weird.
4508913 What ever you said I approve ;D xp
That mare's got some issues.
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She's also in two parts.
And it's gonna need a lot of emotional tape to fix that.
Or one roll of duct tape
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>.>
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*thumbs up*
A surprisingly touching chapter, considering Cosmic was, well, being Cosmic.
Curse you television for forever ruining that phrase....
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I really like your Ideas Hat. But your writing style still lacks... A lot. I mean your ideas are great, so are your Characters. But sometimes it's really random and I think you can imporve that. You've got so much potential. It's more important to have good ideas, because you can learn a better writing. Keep your work up, always tryto improve and stay awesome man.
This is a new definition of getting head.
That last line made me like Cosmic that much more.
It'll be awesome when he is forced to defend her from a lynch mob or a slew or propositions. Both will be awesome in different ways.
Do you think she still remembers that immortality spell?
The head is on a roll.
FINALLY! A story (not counting one-shots) where the mare does not want the main character to have a harem!
I'm so sick of those, it feels good to read a story aboutthe bond of a unqiue growing couple and not some shallow herd or one night stand.
Thanks for the story so far author!
4508587 Yeah, I see that a lot in his work. My instead of me, the instead of they. Many little things. Using context you can understand what he meant to say, but stopping to do so just distracts from the story. Good thing it's such a great story that even a grammar Nazi like myself can forgive him.
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MY HANDS ARE TOO DUMB TO KEEP UP WITH MY BRAIN! DAMN THESE GORILLA HANDS!
This is a so creepy romantic!
Awww. She says the sweetest things.
That all felt a bit sudden. Though it is rather understandable, what with all the build-up and the teasing and her personality... Actually, I'm almost surprised it didn't happen sooner
I really like how her character is being explored. It's funny that the more he tries to find out about her, the more we get to kow about him as well. It feels like they are both growing through this experience The same goes for Dust. While she is not quite as vocal, her character grants a lot of opportunities, story-wise. Also, I have a real soft-spot for her
Aces, boyo!
I love it! God this is a good one Sir Hat.
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Duct tape fixes all.
4514372 Just keep up the good work, you sexy gorilla-handed bastard.
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4513867 I am planning on baking the scones.
OMAKE-Vision™
Reunited Cosmic Dust: "Oi! All this bucking time, and I coulda reattached any time I wanted? Tha's jes GRAND, it is!" *rage causes head to pop off neck again*
Cosmic: "Bollocks."
Damn I cant wait for the next chapter
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this image is amazing!
4532342 I agree
my initial reaction to this story
This is one of the strangest relationships I ever seen, and I bloody like it.
Love that ending, this, chapter and the whole story! Your her fucking hero, in every possible way. Now marry that mare!
Ooh, I like the new cover art. Is that representative of Cosmic/Dust's actual appearance?
the new cover art is freaking epic
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First off, can I say that your avatar is one of the most adorable and amazing things I ever seen?
And also this pretty much summarizes this story, but in a good way at least.
This is very relevant to my interests. You wrote a very awesome tsundere and I'm interested to see how this all plays out. Usually I'm not a big fan of OC x Human, but this is definitely a heck of an exception.
4559637 But... The Headless Mare is actually part of MLP, isn't she?
Or am I confused due to lack of sleep?
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Well yeah, of course. This version just has lots of original characteristics to her. Hence, an OC. The Headless Horse doesn't have a head as far as we know and has a different shape and color.
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The Headless Horse is not OC
But the personality and the head make her an OC. The idea isn't but the character is.
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Yep, that's basically what I said, thanks.
4569353 What's with you and abusive relationships? ...Not to mention dialogue heavy everything...
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I have a few non turbulent relationships, but they're kinda dull.
And given Cosmic's situation, I'd say she's handling it quite well.
4577692 ...It's still dialogue heavy. Not much happens, and the main focal point is two characters talking. You aren't descriptive enough.
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That's what these are, a ballad of two people, not some epic adventure.