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SeaPonysTears


I fell face first into MLP in 2012, and am now (im)patiently waiting for Season 5!

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An unpredictable turn of events leaves Scootaloo blazing full-speed ahead through the turbulent skies above Cloudsdale.
What she finds there, in her darkest hour as she contemplates her death, is how much she appreciates her life, and all the ponies that help to color it.

Sometimes, in the midst of your worst pain, that is when your true light will shine the brightest...

Takes place a few years after season 4.

Credit, as always, to my Schnoopy-doo, OnyxTheGryphon, for editing, proof-reading, and helping me with the cover art. :D SO SHINY.
Credit to Kittamaru, for helping me with the title. :)

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Comments ( 11 )
Comment posted by Anyne deleted May 23rd, 2014

Dunno why you have half up and half down votes... while the story could use a bit of polish... the point is there.
Sometimes, in the midst of your worst pain, in your darkest hour... that is when your true light will shine brightest.

Comment posted by OnyxTheGryphon deleted May 23rd, 2014
Comment posted by SeaPonysTears deleted May 23rd, 2014

4430710 Exactly :) And i knew it would have a mix feeling. its not easily digestable and to anyone who hasnt felt that deep level of emotion it would seem wordy and hard to follow. i edited it quite a but to keep it flowing but its theraphy, its symbolic and so itll be what it is.

4431040 Indeed... anyone who has been there... well, you just know. Anyone who hasn't? You can't even really describe it to them adequately..

Comment posted by Anyne deleted May 23rd, 2014
Comment posted by Matt11 deleted May 23rd, 2014
Comment posted by SeaPonysTears deleted May 23rd, 2014

great story it felt very real to scoots character :scootangel:


why are there so many deleted comments i've never seen this many for any story never mind such a small story ???

A very interesting and sad yet enjoyable read. A few rushed thoughts/ideas here and there which are over-lookable in the grand shceme of things.

Implied shipping of AJ and Rarity has me curious (never heard that ship before) and Scootaloo's implied kiss and interactions with the other CMCs has me interested to what is meant to be implied who it was with and if both SB and AB have feelings for Scoot.

Also, for the forshadowed Scoot X Dash fic, is the magenta comet going the seventh colour of the sonic rainboom? (an idea that has crossed my mind in the past).

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