What starts out as a normal night at home for Octavia Melody turns into a reality from her wildest dreams.
This is my first published FIMfiction. I've been a lurker up to this point. I'm currently helping proof-read and edit (and sometimes, write entire sections of) my snoopy-doo's fic: In Service to the Princess..
I hope you like it, and I hope to post more soon!
All of the great Octavia/Vinyl fics here on FIMFiction.net helped to inspire this, and I hope it lives up to their legacy.
Edited and proof-read by OnyxTheGryphon
Chapters (1)
HUZZAH! First up vote AND first comment! The plot-twist was amazing!
I do like this story so far, Octy and Vinyl are by far my favorite pair
Oh my. Your writing is simply wonderful!
And all in 2,300~ words too.
I do hope that you would write even more amazing stories.
TaviScratch PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ
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Aww! ^__^ Thank you so much! I shall! Huzzah!
4404949 Thanks :) Me too!
Be careful what you ask for, Octy! Vinyl's definitely the evil genie sort.
I demand more!
i love the way you wrote her cello playing. i wish there were more like that in all aspects of these fanfictions...i tried that with my warmth story on fanfiction.net. xD....anyways i love this- an instant fave and thumps way up
So little with so much, yet I don't feel cheated.
The writing manages to go on for more than a thousand words without much of anything happening, yet I don't think that it was wasted. The obvious allusions to intercourse make for interesting writing and are just the right level of obvious, not so much that the truth is revealed, not so little that the tension of what is really meant is lost.
The story feels like it's just begun, and that's because it really just set the scene for a story. It serves as a great hook, it is the beginning of a story that could go anywhere. But it just ends. Most stories begin where this ends.