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I really hope this updates soon. A great beginning so keep up the good work!
Very good first chapter. Far better than any of mine. It pulls the reader in and makes us want more. Good job
This is quite good writing and I like that fresh, original start of your story. You should continue this
It has returned! Good chapter nonetheless.
finally after dayz of waiting
good, good kick their asses
Might wanna run your story through a spell check, Noticed things Like Brake, braking and Sward
*break, Breaking, Sword
Could we get a picture of your undead or a equipment list?
This story is good to other people. I'm not saying it is a bad one, I just won't read the rest of it. Mainly because you had me, until you let Luna win. I mean would've accepted her turning hollow not just dying. But her winning against the Chosen Undead? No thanks.
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I understand where you're coming from and thought of almost the same thing but there are a few problems, one is that the games never say how you get it besides it's a curse but how do you get it? Another is a story needs to have the main character face a challenge otherwise it wouldn't be satisfying when they succeed. It's why there aren't too many where the main guy is a god, unless he's fighting other gods he would always win so you don't care when he does so having the undead die against harder opponents means that when she does win it'll be better for more readers, it also gets stale after a while with nonstop winning. And the last thing, it's Dark Souls, I still die in end game armor by one of those bellyflopping bastards.
5138758 Ok.
Luna only won because he didn't use any magic on her. And he barely even dodged to begin with.
5138758 This is a long post, so you do not have to read it if you don't want to.
Sorry for not replying for so long. I kinda blanked this from my mind for a bit. But, I wanted to give you my reason's for exactly why I thought the chosen undead should have won. You see, I base my duels between characters from different works of fiction on experience and what they have beaten. Now, it is true that the chosen undead can be killed by basic enemies if their guard is down. However, they have faced Gods, demons, dragons, and other powerful and horrible creatures, and come out on top. They did this, by dying repeatedly and learning their enemies move sets. In my eyes, by now, they know just about every trick in the book, and could counter just about anything you throw at them. Compare that to some ponies who, even in the past, have only fought a Chaos Spirit, who isn't even as powerful as Sheograth from Elder Scrolls(because while Discord can change reality, at full power Sheograth can break it) as their toughest foe, then yeah. Also, as a non-brony who only has info from fanfics and wouldn't be caught dead watching the show unless it was a parody to make fun of it, I do not see the Princesses as gods, just as normal but powerful ponies. They can be killed, it will just be difficult. However, I understand that this is your story and you can write it the way you want. I just will not read it. Good bye, and I hope your story does well.
Also pretty stupid...