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I'm kinda bad at comment's, and believe in Karma.


This story is a sequel to Serpent of the south

It is amazing how someone in high position of power and authority can make mistakes. Whether it is lowering your guard in an official Trial, trusting justice to happen. Or using an archaic privilege to over rule the courts final ruling in front of so many beings witnessing it, all because of fears caused by some vision. Leading to a cold frozen prison to one, and a political sh*tstorm and potentially burned bridges to other, who still hopes that things will calm down in the long run...

But fate has other plans. And marilith Naja's forced hibernation has come to an early end. And with the help from a familiar face and from the native folks from the lands of the north, she will slither her way back to the south. With the intention of giving some promised payback to a certain pony sitting upon a throne with her cake filled bottom...

Edit: Whuuut? Got featured on on its first day (8.7.2020)??? Even got hot...:derpyderp2:

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 286 )

I would read this, but I have to get back to sleep. See you tomorrow, oh sweet joy.

Well alright then, we continue on. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.

"I'm sure she most likely will help your people, once you explain your plight. Maybe even more so once she hears what's going on in south."

You mean Celestia slowly losing more and more control, going to further and further lenghts to keep it together, all the while managing to deluded herself into believing it's necessary for the "good of her little ponies" :moustache:

"Still cannot believe how many things where boiling below the surface among those ponies."

Oh Celly, what did you do :pinkiesad2:

I am looking forward to the next chapter of this story!

..... You made me squee

At work....

I would say it was a perfectly reasonable reaction, although In a bit inconvenient place :ajsmug:

.... I'm glad you agree to it being a reasonable reaction

and so celestia self fulfilling prophecy begins

I wonder who he they fed to the fish is.

I like, favorite, and track this even before I read it

Add joker's mad laugher here

Keep it together? It's already broken past fixing. What Celestia's going to lengths to do is to keep her ponies from discovering that they're looking at a worthless imitation.

Comment posted by hive vs machine deleted Jul 8th, 2020

and so celestia slowly becomes not Dawn Breaker, but her father as she slowly slips into racism:pinkiecrazy:
least nadja will have some allies again! yay!

well well well, can't wait for her to get free and beat the white out of Celestia and that is a lot of white. also can't wait to see how fucked Celestia is on her not so shine throne cause she fucked it up pretty bad last time. I am really happy to see the sequel so soon and can't wait for further chapter to come out.

I am glad that you decided to continue this story :) The beginning hints at an epic tale!


Hehehehehe hahahahahaha! Oh Celestia you hath not known what you have unleashed, because the lass Naja is definitely out of patience for thee. She is going to run you all over the shops like a beast that needs discipline. Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned and Naja is one very scorned lady in regards to Celestia.

The common theme in any Celestia is that she never seems to understand there are more sentient creatures than 'her' ponies.

As such, she tends to treat them like chess pieces, numb, stupid chess pieces and ignores the very likely, very French rebellion she's encouraging.

Nice continuation keep up the good work and I will be back again for the next update


"And we just might have a big enough shelter for her to stay warm. But now, let start removing ice from her ar-"

Oooh, nice sentence cut-off.

I'm as surprised as you are that this got hot so fast. But more power to you.

Will reveal that later...:pinkiecrazy:
Well, I can tell that Naja plans to give sunbutts face minimum ten punches... Per hand. And some more.:pinkiecrazy:
I honestly did not expect that either. Or that it has (at the time of writing this) 130+ likes, with no dislikes... Was expecting at least few to appear during first hour...:derpyderp1:

Comment posted by Ryder_406 deleted Jul 9th, 2020

This should be interesting (grabs popcorn)

At last, A Sequel!!!

On another note: Maybe you should give her Elemental Materia linked with Ice Materia? That way, she would have cold/Ice resistance and possibly heal herself when she is hitted by Ice-related spell/attack. THEN CELESTIA WILL HAVE NO MEANS TO STOP NAJA, THE COLD WILL ONLY MAKE HER STRONGER, LITERALLY!!!! HAHAHAHA HAHAHAHA HAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!

Good good, might want to pop an chapter to the old story so people will be alerted of the new story.

With how hot this story is I'm surprised she hasn't already thawed out already. :rainbowlaugh: Still featured as of this post GG :moustache: :moustache: :moustache:


Oh god please no. I want there to be something left after shes done wrecking Celestia.

Why not Bahamut Fury while at that?
As far as I know, this is the strongest Bahamut with it's Exaflare.
This is the said attack

In my opinion, Celestia's punishment should be thus: Her horn broken, her wings severed, and banished to the Netherlands for 500 years.:twilightangry2:

Alsø wik
Alsø alsø wik
Wi nøt trei a høliday in Sweeden this yer ?
See the løveli lakes
The wønderful telephøne system
And mani interesting furry animals
Including the majestic møøse
A møøse ønce bit my sister..."

-Exerb from the travels of Mont E. Pie

You know, for someone that was apparently scrubbed from Equestria's history, a lot of beings seem to know all about Naja.

That.... is badass...... and would also kill way more that necessary. I think s8n would be better because it took all of FF7s cast to kill the damn thing. And it's "not" a black materia* (as far as I'm aware the Advent Children movie has no Black materia abilitys) and I want ether Bahumut Sin or one of the Weapons as a summon. I think Ruby weapon personally would be a trip.

So now we have reindeers?

Where did you get that? Its glorious!

I wonder how long was Naja asleep in ice for.

Working/Wrestling with it....:rainbowdetermined2:

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