Derpy and the Muffin Man

Derpy Hooves. The mailmare of Ponyville, the clumsy one, and the muffin-lover.
These are only a few of her many titles.
What about Doctor Whooves' wife?
Here is the long lost story of their courtship, and how their daughter, Dinky Doo, came to be. Well, the cleaner version.
Tagged romance because there is a lot of romance in this. Also rated teen for some mentions of mature content.

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Galaxy Knight

Galaxy Knight #1 · May 30th, 2014 · · ·

It's...weird. Don't get me wrong, I like weird but you put a lot of content into a one shot so its a bit much to process. Overall, I really liked it but I think you might need to fix your formatting a bit.

The Isapie

The Isapie #2 · May 30th, 2014 · 1 · ·

4468710 Thanks. I had a brain fart about the layout, and I was going to make it shorter, but my fingers clearly say otherwise.
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Civviq Writer

Civviq Writer #3 · Jun 3rd, 2014 · · ·

I think it´s great! But... Will he come back??

The Isapie

The Isapie #4 · Jun 9th, 2014 · · ·

4491723 Who knows? I plan on writing a sequel someday! But not right now. I'm kinda busy with schoolwork!
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Cpt Jake Hoofness

Cpt Jake Hoofness #5 · Jan 12th, 2015 · · ·

OMGOMGOMGOMG!!!

I've been following the Bride of Discord universe for a while now, so I internally freaked out when I saw the reference.

Flutterbat276

Flutterbat276 #6 · Aug 17th, 2015 · · ·

So QUI cares XD excellent French usage! And DA FEELS! I'm crying now...and the last time I cried reading a story was with "Markiplier Notices The Reader" (not on FiMFiction, it's on WattPad. Also not recommended to anyone who is -18) when Mark died at the end...I don't wanna say HOW he died cause, y'know, more spoilers than I've already given...but this was SAD! Make a sequel plz! I need closure!