Hyperventilate(verb):
1: to breathe abnormally fast or deeply as so to effect hyperventilation.
2: to breathe in this manner as from excitement or anxiety.
Hyper(adjective):
1: Having a very excitable, or nervous temperament; high-strung.
2: Emotionally stimulated or overexcited.
It's Pinkie Pie's birthday. Her twenty-first, to be precise.
Wait.
If it's her birthday, then who's planning?
None other than her girls, of course. Although, this time, Twilight has decided to tell Pinkie what they're doing. After all, they don't want a repeat of Pinkie's sweet sixteenth.
Twilight and the gang are hyperventilating. Pinkie is just hyper.
No cover art yet, because copyright and whatnot should be respected, unless you're quoting. Once I draw one, I will post it, and onto my DA as well.
Please don't put a dictionary definition in your description. The goal of the description is to draw interest to your story, and I can't think of anything less interesting than a dictionary definition.
anyhow
And dictionary definition usually goes at the beginning of stories, not description.
I'll be watching this. I think it'll be fun.
5783526 literally, anyhoo. Not anyhow. That's too normal to be Pinkie.
5785473 Thank you! It will, I promise.
Thanks for the comments, guys! I really appreciate it, and how you guys are helping me become a better fanfiction writer.
Hah! Hilarious. Especially the part where the Crusaders fell over. This is some good show-style comedy here. You don't easily find that kind around.
This is a very nice, fluffy story, and the friendship lessons feel pretty well thought out and natural. Great job on this, once again!
Crashing and bashing!!!
Her sister Maud should wish her a happy birthday.