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derpychic


I love to write stories

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Fluffle Puff ran off and now Chrysalis is worried, while Fluttershy found her and took her to Twilight. But when Fluffle Puff manages to make a army of fluffle puffs, can they be stopped before it's too late?

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Nice use of description. You might want to go back and proofread though since there are quite a few spelling mistakes. Can't wait to see Fluffle Puff recruit some new members to her army, lol. You are making lots of improvement as you write more stories, keep up the good work!

4280410 Yeah, if you watch Ninja turtles than you'll know why I decided to make the twins the captain of the royal guard and Chrysalis' faithful assassin and hunter (Shreder kidnapped Splinter's daughter, raised her as his own, and now she's basically an assassin), try to guess which is which.

-:heart::derpytongue2:

Haven't read yet but I say no they are doomed doomed -buster

Okay, I thought of information about the twins...

Princess Heartbreak:
Age: 15
Role: Assassin, princess
Personally: She is independent on her own or when leading her half of the guard, but if she and her brother are working together he's in charge. She's a little bit of a chatter box and unless you're a family member or she's on a stealth mission she'll Jack you up if you tell her to shut up. She's some what sassy, and is better at using different weapons than her brother, while he only uses two, she has a whole arsenal. She also likes using her beauty to get boys to listen to her.

Prince Dimlight:
Age: 15, but he's five minutes older than his sister.
Role: Hunter, prince
Personally: He's as independent as his sister and when they work together he's in charge. He only speaks when it's something important and is extremely organized. He is the stronger (both physically and mentally) and more mature of the two, although he's better at fighting with his bear hooves, a knife, and a bow and arrow. He has a similar affect to his sister's, but with girls.

Could still use some work but what ever.

-:heart::derpytongue2:

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