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Square Root


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Nothing had worked before. Even after all of the invasions, planning, and impersonation (imponyation?), the Changelings were still a race that had little authority in the world. Yet when Chrysalis has an idea that just might work, it's possible that everything just might change.

Caution to readers: If you are looking for Fluffle Puff as a main character, you are sadly mistaken. This story is mostly about Chrysalis and the Changelings. If you want a story all about Fluffle, look somewhere else.
Other notes: This is my first fanfic ever so yeah. Also, I am not the creator of Fluffle Puff or anything, I just came up with this.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 14 )

One name describes my reason for faving this;
Fluffle Puff.

Comment posted by tsaukpaetra deleted May 4th, 2014

In my opinion these chapters should have been one, split by scenes... But we suppose you're still getting in to things....
Keep going! ;)

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Thanks for the advice. I'll be sure to implement it in future chapters and/or stories. :twilightsmile:

Interesting, she promises that they are saved from an apocalypse but doesn't mention the cause. We can't help but like her deception is in vain, especially if the entirety of Equestria does not fall as planned....
Keep going! ;)

When does Fluffle Puff come in!?

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She won't show up until the end. This story is really more about Chrysalis and the Changelings than Fluffle Puff.

.... Word of advice: Make the chapters longer. Merge a few into one if you need to. Using a minimum of 1,000 words each should help you get them to a better length.

Hmm, we're not all that good at generating personas from scratch....
So the door was unlatched, lol fail. Chrysalis better get her public announcement going quick!
One thing that strikes me as odd is how smoothly the meeting went. Every problem was quickly and effectively dealt with with next to no fuss. We were sure there would be some old fart making a ruckus about having ponies in the hive, yet we get barely a frown of concern.
Keep going! ;)

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