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GoodPiggy76


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"So you're staying in the one bed, one bath? On the first floor?"
"Yeah." He said.
After exchanging other information, she slid my room key over to him.
"3rd floor, 3rd room." She said with one last smile.

are you sure it's the 3rd floor?

He ended up fitting all of them into my two pockets.

I think it's "his two pockets".

I didn't catch anything else.
this seems like a good story so far. i want the next chapter soon

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Thanks. I'll fix them, and I'll try to get out the next chapter as soon as possible. :)

YAY !!!! My interest has defiantly been peaked :derpyderp2::derpyderp2::derpyderp2::derpyderp1:

Interesting, i'll stick around:ajsmug:

4488060 Haha, I'll try my best to get it out as soon as possible.

Good chapter. Just one thing... Ponies DO sweat. Trust me I'm a farmboy.

4534965 No big. As far as domesticated animals go, ponies/horses are the only ones that do sweat like us. Thus the phrase " Rode hard and put away wet " . ( like Milky in this chapter )

No problem, at least we have one great chapter here to read!:pinkiehappy:

4854330 Thanks for understanding :)

So the prince drug you I starting to think he want a human for a different kind of job

5562042 Sorry. I'm very lazy, but I'll try to get it up soon.

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That's what make them good athletes besides men. if your horse is not sounding because of exercise or climate change he may be suffering from a syndrome

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