"So you're staying in the one bed, one bath? On the first floor?"
"Yeah." He said.
After exchanging other information, she slid my room key over to him.
"3rd floor, 3rd room." She said with one last smile.

are you sure it's the 3rd floor?

He ended up fitting all of them into my two pockets.

I think it's "his two pockets".

I didn't catch anything else.
this seems like a good story so far. i want the next chapter soon

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Thanks. I'll fix them, and I'll try to get out the next chapter as soon as possible. :)

More???

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