Celestia, of all ponies, actually has it harder than you think. She cannot handle her sister's death.
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Smokey Majenta
I LOVE TWILIGHT AND FLUTTERSHY AND VINYL SCRATCH AND LUNA AND I LIKE FANFICTIONS AND IMA PEGASISTER BUT REALLY IM A UNICRON AND MY SPECIAL TALENT IS WATER BENDING OKAY BYEEEE
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Gha!
I think there's a interesting story in here somewhere and I didn't notice anything outright wrong with the text itself, but please add a space between paragraphs!
You're not restricted by printing cost here, and it makes it much easier to read.
And I personally don't mind it, but a lot of people find colored text for speech very tacky and distracting. Unless you find it a must for the story you intend to tell I'd recommend changing it since it's only a single line at the moment.
Hope that helped.
4197336 Thank you very much for your feedback. I will solve this problem quickly.
Wow that was great
Kinda short
Short and yucky but I still like it
4217885 That's...good?
Well whatever, glad you like it
There's no more?
4217922 Not yet, friend. I will write more tonight, but please be patient.
4219226 Alright I like your Pic
4222225 Very Many thank you. I was thinking on changing it but maybe it wil stay
4222600 No problem I made one myself
4222701 It looks like the pony's on fire. It's amazing
4222706 Thanks I named him flame heart
4222709 Have you written anything? I'd love to read it.
4224053 Well I'm trying but its not working so well I need alot of help
4224236 I'm willing to lend a hoof
4226117 Really I can send you what I made so far and you can edit if you want I really would ont mind
4226904 Well sure, if you don't mind me changing a couple things.
#TrueTrueFriend
4229273 Sure thing I will send it to you bye Message
Not bad so far
Is this story done yet or what?
4704778 I haven't been working on it as much. I'm stuck for ideas.
are you okay?
4706707 I'm fine what about yourself
4708395 I'm okay if you're okay.
4709674 Anyway where do you talking to me now I like sent you 50 messages
4709807 I answered all of them, but you never said anything back! The last one you sent me I answered it twice!!!
4713613 I never got any from you
I'm going to talk to an admin about this messaging problem
4713695
But the weird thing is that fanofmares has been talking to me, and we haven't had this problem. Btw, I blocked him. He's a douche.
Thanks though
4718405 Fanof who?
4718405 A colt who calls himself fanofmares, or fan of mares or whatever. He said he knew you in real life, and that you two were friends. If he lying?
4718713
I do answer your messages...they never reach you.
4750560 never
4750586 I'm gonna see if there's something i can do. ttyl
4755649 Alright
4756390 I can't get ahold of an admin
4807236 So? I don't really care anymore
4807236 So? I don't really care anymore
4813661 Oh uh...ok....