With the Blueblood family under investigation, anypony capable of preforming a safety inspection is preoccupied. The next best qualified group just so happens to be the Bearers of the Elements of Harmony, according to Celestia. And so, the Mane 6 are sent off to fill in for the absent experts and evaluate the Dranorth Magical Science and Research Facilities.
But as with any story being worth told, and some that aren't, the trip turns into more than just an inquiry if everything is accident proof...
Chapters (1)
So, first chapter of my first long-term story. Hope you like, constructive critique is appreciated, bla bla bla, all that jazz.
Er... What?
Sounds interesting, tracking.
I cancelled this story for a few reasons:
1: I didn't like how I wrote the only chapter. In my opinion, it was very sloppy. I had fun writing it, but it was still very sloppy.
2: I decided to completely redo the plot to the point where the current chapter would be meaningless. In fact, It may even have a different title.
3: I want to improve my writing before I do something large like I was planning with this story.
4: I would procrastinate severely on this story.
So in order to provide future better quality stories, I'll see what I can do to improve my writing before taking up this project again, on a different FIMFiction account.