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Sava Warg


I'm not really noticible. A nobody knocks at your door, and you ignore him. I knock on your door, and you call the freakin Ghostbusters. I don't really care. It just means I can do whatever I want.

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The life and times of a lonely colt who lives in the Everfree Forest. Nopony knows his name. The only thing known about him is he sells recipes, beats up criminals with his own two hooves, and he likes to buy the strangest ingredients, and even the ponies who know this trivial information are few in number. He once loved to go treasure hunting with friends, until one day it took a turn for the worst. Now he is retired, and will do anything to keep everyone out of harms way. Whenever anypony gets too fond, he packs up and leaves, for fear of causing another disaster like the night from so long ago.

My first fanfic. It am experimenting with writing types to see what i can pull off. I will keep it up unless I get too many people telling me to stop. (gore is for bloody noses and awfully descriptive bashed up faces) Cover Art by my kind older sister.

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 29 )

I personally like typical stories, but I like how this story is shaping up. Pretty. Good for a test run.

4210690 Thanks, next storytelling type is first person. It might work, who knows. I'll work on it when I get free time

I want to write stories, but I never have time.

4210717 work on them when you get sick

I never am sick though! It's weird.

4210721 Well, if you wake up too early, instead of going back to sleep, work on a story until you are tired

Definetely a hidden gem. Adding this to my group.

4214888 Not sure it's gonna stay that way. You see, I haven't gotten much sleep in the past few days, so it might get a bit crappy in the next few chapters. Oh well.:twilightsmile:

There has been exactly one sol-year passed between season one and the season 4 premier (hence the fact that they are celebrating Summer Sun for the FIRST TIME with Luna)

Either way, this story's good so far. Try and space out your paragraphs more, get some cover art even if it's just Google Images random crap, and get an editor to go over and fix what you already have.

4214924 Well, I know a good fan artist, who is also a grammar Nazi, so that should be sorted soon. Oh and by the way, there was a winter wrap up halfway through season one, which has the nightmare moon one for it's first episodes. Like I said, I did my research.

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Then don't write. I mean that seriously.

I have five situations where I never write: When I'm tired, when I'm hungry, when I've lost blood, when I am sick, and when I have a concussion. I have to restrain myself but it works.

It works like you said: If you are mentally screwed, your work suffers IMMEASURABLY. Get some sleep, eat, whatever before writing again.

4214949 I will take this information to heart. I just felt the need to get this one out before I lost my ideas. I only get creative surges when I have been creative lately.

Comment posted by Sava Warg deleted Apr 11th, 2014

sugercube corner serves alchohal? idk seems a bit strange foals go in there all the time.

Comment posted by Sava Warg deleted May 2nd, 2014

hmmm interesting time to start reading chapter 1

he's 4? thats a little bit too young to be going into ruins and stuff and living alone

Comment posted by Sava Warg deleted Jun 11th, 2014

Taking this story down for Review. Lot's of thinking and wanting to rewrite some parts led me to this. Sorry for the inconvenience.

Alright, I fixed it. Read it over again if you want, but not much has changed.

Interesting... The Knights of the "Something" Table shall review it.

5207442 Okayyyy... I just posted a new chapter, and someone has already commented. Thanks though!

5207456 I do hope this fall into our "Good story list".

But be warned, if you see a guy named Guardian and babs, just prepare yourself. He is not the happiest guy around.

(Me personally, I think he has read well over one too many bad fictions.)

You should go browsing the groups, see if you can cram this story into a few of them.

It will get more noticed that way. :twilightsmile:

Edit: For example, I just added this story to the crossover group due to the tag crossover on the story.

5207480 I can't really find any that match up with my story type, and I don't want to be that guy. The one who puts stuff in random groups. Not sure what to do. :derpyderp2:

5207854 In the search bar on the top, just enter in the tags that your story has. It will take you to groups that use that tag.

And, join groups like the "I just want a comment" group to get more vocal viewers. Or "The Writers Group", or even the "Love and Tolerance" group. :raritywink:

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