Go to sleep one night and wake up in a strange new world. Just another day in the life of Gensokyo's ordinary magician, Marisa Kirisame. But when dangerous youkai tag along for the ride, she may find that talking horses aren't her biggest problem...
My first real attempt at a Touhou crossover, and first fic in a long time. It will feature a variety of characters from the Touhou series and various appearances of ponies from the show, I hope you will have as much fun reading as I do writing it.
Thanks goes out to Bigorion for his help as editor, and Steventheman and Starshine Dart for pre-reading.
Chapters (1)
Looking good so far.
Dragon sign Master Spike
Hello Again
From what I've read this is a good start some errors especially the *
And also indenting, but other then that it was a good chapter
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Aah, I thought I had taken all the * out, thanks for pointing that out
Ok, not bad but there are a few issues. It's really rushed, the characters feel flat, and the formatting is messed up. There needs to be space between paragraphs, otherwise it looks like a wall 'o text.
The lack of Danmaku from the playable character's side irks me a bit.
This looks fun though
Learning a new magic,
the chaotic star shall find friendship
whilst someone not quite appreciative of this veil shall search,
and find a phantasm not fit creatures of light.
Shall we do battle beneath this vivid sky?
Awaiting further releases.
Is this dead? Are you dead?
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Not dead, don't plan to be. Just difficulties
It is nice to know that people want to see more though
BWHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAH!!!!
Oh poor poor Equestria!
Quick! Someone summon Reimu, the only one that can force Yukari to cease this Incident before her and Discord start to have a prank war!!!
Vote: 10+++
DO MORE!
Marisa as an Earth Pony who can fly and do magic... Awasome!!!
I really want to see Stage 2. ☆☆☆
great chapter.. can't wait for more.
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story is ded, not big souprice
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Dead is an understatement at this point