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Thank you!

So cute I love it.

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The best part about absurdity is that if you take it far enough it morphs into something so out there that it becomes mundane. That's exactly what I was going for and I'm glad it came off well.

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Thank you kindly, friend. Raridog is one of the things I do with great aplomb.

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All my skills remain intact, even when I don't like the pairing if I agreed to do it.

I liked the story bits, the rest was a alright.

A bit of background info on my request is in order I guess. I should also mention I have a dark sense of humour.

I find the idea of being woken up to find a lover having sex with you or intending to have sex with you in your warm safe bed to be an amusing prospect. One of my friends got to visit one of his friends who had moved to a different province. She wanted to have a "house warming". It lasted a whole week XD. Apparently, she encouraged him to have sex with her while she was sleeping, going as far as sleeping in the nude. He never took up that particular offer (boo!). He told me about that when he came back and I thought the situation to be quite hot and it's been a fantasy of mine ever since.

The whole situation can also sound like a rape to those who don't know what's going on and I like those kind of humorous twists.

I guessed that the guys should have some sort of consent to come over beforehand, so why not have the mare call them over for a bit of a pick-me-up because she was feeling a bit down? But for what reason... losing your job is pretty depressing.

I wanted the guys to be scarred and tough looking to seemingly reinforce the idea that they were on the surface bad rapists or something, but actually kind individuals. Don't judge a book by it's cover kind of thing.

I went through a few situations that would be tragic, but ironic, and already fit what I had already come up with. A firehouse burning down seemed ironic as hell and would be a good reason for the guys having scars.

But why would the house burn down? I went with negligence and falling asleep fit in theme with the sleep sex.

I then came up with the idea that the mare was a chronic sleeper or that her special talent was falling asleep at the drop of a hat. The name Sleepy Time came quick and as a bit of a creepy reference to the "Sleepy Time" film reel in the horror film Sinister. In it, a child drugs his family and ties them to their beds. When they wake up, he goes to each room and films them as he slits their throats. I'd like to believe I snuck that in there good...

The cutie mark came from the idea of abruptly face planting onto a pillow and some feathers bursting out. It also went with the tickling fetish I wanted in there. Feet tickling is my main fetish so feather imagery is a must. It's also why she's a Pegasus; they're practically feather dispensers and you can tickle their hoovesies with them limitlessly, even if they break the feathers accidentally. Gabby has a thing for clean hooves so it rather appealed to him, too.

To have them all be coworkers made for a particularly good reason for the guys to come in quickly and save Sleepy Time's ass and get scarred up. Eheh... I've had some experience with improper workplace conduct with another guy and it's awesome fun.

Yeah, I kinda tailored the plot to something that would appeal to Gabby, possibly greatly. I think it's somewhat similar to his trio of buffalos in his Clip Clip anthology.

As for the names of the firemen, I couldn't think of anything. Hell, some of the names I came up with were "Buffle Kill" and "Rough Rugger". Pretty lame...

It took awhile, but Rushing Ravine came to mind as another morbid reference. Why would a ravine be rushing? Because you jumped off and are headed straight to the bottom. It fit in with the native theme going with buffalos. I also like to think it's a heroic name, charging headlong into suicidal situations to rescue someone and Rushing probably got the most injured...

For Andrei... there's nothing creepy or morbid here :P I couldn't think of a good European name so I looked up popular ones on Wikipedia. So yeah, no particular reference here. Maybe to Andrei 3000 from Outkast. "Hey Ya" is a very happy song.

I like how Gabby made Sleepy plump. I know he's partial to plump ladies, so this addition probably made him like writing this? Being plump also fits with the pillow theme. Personally, I prefer women of average build and small, apple like breasts, but I do find plump women quite enticing as well.

I also like how he added in polyamory. I originally visioned them as friends, but this adds a whole new level of love. Quite fascinating.

The tickling turned me on greatly. I like how the frogs were described as fleshy and having the scent of lotion. It's in the details...

Oh, and tickling while having sex is an explosive sensory overload for the ticklee :)

Eheh... when I intended for DP, I was thinking one in the pink and one in the stink. But double vaginal sounds very fulfilling to Sleepy, plus it involved the guys being sandwiched in there and frotting, which had me drooling. The fact that Andrei's nubby griffin cock was grinding into Rushing's cock and Sleepy's cunt walls is something you wish could happen in real life... the bi in me was amused to no end by this turn of events. Oh, and it totally fits in with polyamory. I think.

It was like some sort of double sandwich. The guys were sandwiching Sleepy and in turn she was sandwiching them inside her. Far out, man...

Thanks for writing this, Gabby <3

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Potted plant? Normally I'm sharp with references. But that escapes me.

It's a nebulous space. I have three universes I actually care about. Bad Apple's, the porn universe with Ironshy, polyrarity and Rachzibah, and the one where the Power Ponies have porn comics.

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Sleepy sex with prior consent is charming and can be very amusing, and sexually arousing.

I thought you meant DP like that but given my vaginal love I tend to like doing vaginal DPs. Plus, it gets me right in my impregnophilia. I like to imagine one of them is going to get her pregnant.

About her figure: I confess, I am completely in love with Mrs. Cake-type bodies, like Pearl. Making more of them is good.

The poly sort of came from me realizing... they saved her life. And she was already interested in them. Given how much I love love it was a natural progression, like Rarity in "Iron Will vs the Penile Code." Or in the third story here.

Your explanation was quite interesting. The references were the sort of things I'd do. Creative and fun for those who get it.

It was fun to do, as hoof fetish work is something I love. Thanks for letting me indulge in a lot of fun stuff. And if you want more hoof work, check my story "Rainbow Dash's Wonderbolts Initiation" in the Soarin' chapter.

Gilda x Garble!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I. . . mean. . . .o-only i-if you want to. . . .

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It's not a bad idea. The teen dragons are on my radar.

4192309 Yay!~

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Plus, I like jerks like that having sex.

4196123 !

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They can take turns dominating each other. Gilda could even show off her contempt and sexual appetite by not even reacting if Garble calls his friends.

4197418 This will be glorious.

Oh, and I think if there was a cover image for this fic, it should be of Cosette and Kohler. They're easily the most interesting pairing in this.

When I think of Jewish golems, I think of Karn from Magic and strangely of "The Bear Jew" from Inglorious Basterds; I usually don't think of them as cuddly and loving.

The story really surprised me. I wonder of Bronystories was thinking of Karn when he came up with the idea... or maybe Bosh.

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He was mostly thinking of the "diamond" joke. He didn't specifically have the golem imagery in mind, just a coal construct. The golem elements were my own addition. Romance tends to be... 'muted' in Bronystories land. I have something slightly like this in mind for the Mane-iac sequel.

Oh, and I'm writing a new clop that features extended hoof-worship and hoofjobbing as part of the sex.

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What do you mean?

If you want to go for absurd... how about Big Mac and the Chimera?

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I'm not doing this for absurdity. I genuinely love interspecies. But that sounds nice. I would actually like that pairing.

4497139 As typical for my analytical self, it made me consider the problems of anatomy. Most of the chimera's body is cat. Cats' reproductive organs are usually rather small compared to the rest of the body, but cats typically have a litter of small cubs. On the other hand, it is much harder to give birth to a multi-headed child, and a chimera anatomy would have to take that into account...

Why am I doing it to myself?

(I comment in plenty of clopfics, but it's always stuff like "the spine doesn't bent that way" or "unlike humans, she wouldn't have the collar bone)

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I had considered that. She might be able to acomadate a male as 'robust' as Big Mac. Also wasn't the back part goat? Goats are rather sexually notable.

4500856 ah, right. The back side is goat. But in either case, she would be much larger than him - I was expecting the opposite problem than you.

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The problem for me is the story rather than the anatomy. I can fiddle with anatomy thanks to magic. The story is the real problem. I'm considering it being the kind of story that ends with "Your family is going to wonder why you keep coming back here so often. They haven't ordered anything in town for a month."

4502039 Neither of them has easily explainable access to magic, at least in this context. Still, anatomical differences are within acceptable margin I think.

I don't comment on the story, because it is unlikely to be a problem - you have written more stories than some people will read in their life - even if I don't like some of the chapter premises here, they are more than adequate for the purpose and you always manage to squeeze some emotion in where lesser writers would not.

I comment on anatomy because it's my pet peeve. (Yours has been great so far, but you wouldn't believe how many stories I have read where you could read a sex scene and not be able to tell whether it's pony or anthro)

4502039 As for story ideas... I was thinking of their first meeting involving Big Mac taking the chair, the flute and the cheese as told by his grandma and then misapplying them because he misunderstood her instructions.

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Set the cheese on the chair and use the flute to serenade her. That should shock her enough that she doesn't eat him. And wear the special boots because she likes how a stallion looks in them.

4502427 You're the author here. I'm just having a sophisticated late night discussion on the properties of a goat's ass

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But he should milk her. Goat milk makes some excellent caramel.

4503077 I have no idea under whay circumstances chimerae lactate

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Maybe when a huge, strapping stallion suckles from one.

4504627 hmm... I guess it's acceptable within the genre... just like poison joke always resulting in futa...

How does a fire burns down a fucking fire station. They would all be at the fire immediately

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I read your story idea about the chimera. I'm a little disappointed you didn't follow through. It could have been epic!

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Ever watch the Steve Martin movie "Roxanne"?