I can't believe you made a sex scene with a golem so warm, fuzzy, and most of all lovingly sexy.

Alliteration is awesome. "Puppy passage" lol. Bronystories definately had a part in this.

So... does this mean I'm making love to a tight gal, before she climaxes, I should quickly switch out with a coal dildo and we'll be rich from the resulting diamond ribbed dildo? Ooo... I wonder if there's a way to make them denticulated...

But yeah, it's a sweet, heartwarming story ^_^

Awww such a cute story from such unlikely sources!

ma not. may not.

Her arms and legs trembled as her body was wracked with shuddering trembles. Maybe use shudder or something to reduce repetition.

I really should have seen the diamond bit coming from a mile off, you gave it all away, but somehow I didn't see it. Now we can add puppy passage to the list of Dog euphemisms.

So, he ended with a diamond dong? (where is Maud Pie emoticon when you need one...)