We all know the history and the geography of Equestria: a landmass inhabited by ponies and other races, all living under the rule of the Royal Sisters Celestia and Luna. Its history lacked of wars, their has been place taken by the ambitions of individuals corrupted by the whispers of power, or by abominations incapable to feel any emotion but boredom and amusement.
But, on the planet Morin, Equestria is not the only continent: beyond the sea there is the Saddled Arabia, inhabited by the horses. And, near the Saddled Arabia, there is Diomedea, a small continent, inhabited by ponies, minotaurs and griffons. Diomedea's history, unknown to most of Equestria's ponies, is full of struggles and wars between the nations.
But, beyond the sea, there isn't only evil and barbarism, as Twilight will find out in a book, gift of a diplomatic mission, where Diomedea's history is detailed and the greatest secret of Equestria is held...
Collab between me and BleepBloop2.
Bold description!
4075604
Yes, I wrote the description in bold, do you have a problem with that?
4075655
Eh. Are you open to hearing feedback, or do you just want it that way?
4075661
Well, I don't see why writing the description in bold is a bad thing.
4075666
Honestly, it doesn't work for presentation all that well. You see, bold/italicized/underlined words are used for a purpose. People use italics for inner thoughts or flashbacks, underlined words for titles, bold for emphasis, etc. Overusing them for something mundane reduces the impact. Also, the fact that the first thing I noticed about your description was the font rather than the content is another flag of concern.
tl;dr: Eye catching is good, but the bold is more distracting than catching.
GEILLSINÊ.
4079643
Alrigt, what does it mean? It's gibberish.
4080484
Some gaelic dialect for "victory"
4081125
Oh, I understand.