• Member Since 23rd Nov, 2013
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armoredbrony1


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This story is about a man, well he isn't exactly a man so to speak. He's a robot.

The man who I am talking about is none other than Crithion Krytech, An Antraxian elite. With the power to fly, the power to form swords out of his arms and has the Intense power of the sun on his side. No! he is not a man, a man is that of human kind. Crithion is a person, a person whom will have to battle though hardships, secrets and evil ranks in order to save those who are threatened along his traumatic journey within the Rainbow Factory.

Through out this story he will learn to hate, love, tolerate and most importantly............Forgive.
But not until he can overcome the wrath of the terrible fate that awaits him In the Factory form hell!
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Please, constructive criticism is highly appreciated and accepted. This is my first Fanfic ever and I would want to better myself in the future so please, if you think something is a miss or if you just plain don't understand something. Pm or message me for some details on the subject. But I Do not want highly negative comments or bold insults in the comments, if it is that off to you. You can message me or better yet don't read or have anything to do with this story. No-One is perfect and I did say this earlier Its my first time writing anything over 3,000 words and is not a school project focusing on one matter. Thank you.

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what is this crossovered with?

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