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What is a pony? But a miserable pile of secrets.


Humiliation and defeat. These are the emotions that Rainbow Dash has felt ever since the new hero Mare-Do-Well showed up. She's better than her at everything, she's stronger, more agile, and somehow she may even be faster than Rainbow Dash herself. At the lowest point in her life Rainbow then visits a place that she never visited much before but she's also not the only one visiting when she comes across a black substance. The creature has promised her power beyond believe, enough to bring down Mare-Do-Well, and also seems to understand her pain. The moment the deal is made Rainbow Dash is gone. All that is left.... is Venom.

Rated teen for mild language usage and blood. Venom and other characters are property of their respective owners.

*Edit 2/5 Hippogriffs have been replaced by horses for the role of the asgaridans and the talk between Dash and Venom as well as her fight with Mare-Do-Well is extended a little.

*Edit 9/20 Coverart made by TP Night. Check him out on Deviantart.

Chapters (14)
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Comments ( 175 )

3837600 Good. Can't wait to see Twilight's rump get kicked. :rainbowdetermined2:

I do like Venom, so this shall be interesting, you got a follower of this story

Faith in you = RESTORED! Good job cleaning it up.

consider my interest piqued. i eagerly await the next chapter.

I'm still waiting for the next chapter but wasn't expecting changes to the first. This gives me more reason to wait for the next chapter. :rainbowdetermined2:

3837600 what did you reply to me? it won't display on my screen?

Not sure what the rewrite was for, but well done all the same. Looking forward to the rest.

3839937 That's because I deleted the old chapter and revised it. Sorry.

Damn, talk about not hesitating:rainbowlaugh: Not bad, some errors here and there but good nonetheless, shall read on:ajsmug: Damn, was hoping Shy would be the one fighting Venom but of well:rainbowlaugh:

Anypony else see the irony in the symbiote taking over a spider?

Eh, once you knock off his Plot Armor, Alduin is a sissy.

As much as I hate to ruin your perfect 69 likes I must like this story too!

4864230 WHY WOULD YOU RUIN THAT?! WHY DEAR LORD?!:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: No but seriously thanks for the like and fav.

4847736 He was a sissy to begin with. I killed him with just arrows.

Anyway's. Great Chapter. Very well written, definitely a step up from what you had going before if you don't mind me saying.

3841075 Hmm... Venom says 'we' and Luna says 'we'. Coincidence? We think not. Mha-ha-ha-ha-ha!!

I can confirm that Shadow King is a thing in Marvel. I saw him on the cartoon Wolverine and the X-Men. The guy's a butt.

damn now that's what i call a sexy one:moustache:

“One, two, Sombra’s coming for you. Three, four, better lock your door. Five, six, grab your bats and sticks. Seven, eight, better stay up late. Nine, ten…..”

let's be honnest , we all knew Twilight was doomed at this point , nice reference you did there

i have to admit, this is much better than the original. good job!

Comment posted by The Assassin Who Laughs deleted Nov 28th, 2017

how often will this be updated.:rainbowderp:

One, two, Sombra’s coming for you. Three, four, better lock your door. Five, six, grab your bats and sticks. Seven, eight, better stay up late. Nine, ten…..

that is almost similar to freddy's song in Nightmare on Elm Street.


It basically is Freddy's song, just changed for Sombra.

5181043 Well this IS a Marvel crossover and Marvel has their OWN archaic speaking character who can control the weather... Draw your own conclusions. :trollestia:


Luna and Thor are going to make sweet love down by the fire?


Well, Loki did bang a horse just to win a bet.

And Luna is much more charming than some random horse. Asgardian Alicentaurs incoming!

Comment posted by Admiral Q Ponyform deleted Nov 28th, 2017

AHAH!!! Just figured out a few things. So, Spidey's gonna appear. YOU ARE A WHOVIAN. And finally, Carnage. Oh, were you peeking at my Christmas list?

5181280 I'm the co-author so all I can say is... MAYBE.

4802816 spider spider spider spider does whatever...its a spider

Comment posted by predatornc deleted Oct 24th, 2014

When I saw Lion skin I thought it was Kraven the hunter

question will the other symbiotes like what was his name Toxin who was the son of carnage and also the other 5 symbiotes I cant spell symbioates...SCREW IT!

5181424 Those will appear but the only one who MIGHT get an appearance in this one is Toxin.

Comment posted by The Assassin Who Laughs deleted Nov 28th, 2017
Comment posted by The Assassin Who Laughs deleted Nov 28th, 2017

5069693 can u pleaaaaaaase continue the story 4 me I love this story:pinkiehappy:

5285334 I am. Just letting it get reviewed by editors.

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