• Published 7th Mar 2014
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A Deceiving Wedding - Petitprincess



What if Shining Armor was the one who got kidnapped by a changeling instead of Cadence? What if it wasn't Chrysalis?

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This Will End!

Metamorphosis hung his head down in thought, slowly following behind Chrysalis. The thought of Twilight being dead, oddly brought a shutter through his body. He knew that ponies were going to be harmed, but he never thought death was going to be put into the mix. He didn't even think about killing Shining Armor, just sucking away his magic, so that he can never overthrow him or his queen. Still, the thought of her being dead, Meta thought sullenly. He picked up his head, stopped flying, looked at Chrysalis, and turned around to look back at the castle. He thought, Maybe, I should....no. No! I can't go back to the castle! Why in all of Equestria would I!? So, who cares if the little brat is dead? That leaves one less pony to deal with. Besides, I already promised you.

He looked at Chrysalis with his head held high and thought to himself, I said to you Chrysalis that all of Equestria will be trembling under our hoof by the end of this day! And I will surely keep that vow. I promise you Chrysalis...


Every single part of her body ached, as she lied on the now cooling ground. It would even hurt to just shut her eyes, as she tried to block out the incessant spikes of pain ringing through her head. Twilight slowly picked up her head, only for it fall back down with a loud thud. She silently cried thinking, Is this it? It can't be...Can it? I can't just die here and leave everypony in the hoofs of those monsters! I can't. I have to- Twilight tried getting back to her hooves, but only ended up falling down. She let out a shaky sigh, choked back a few tears, and tried to get up once more. She thought to herself, This isn't over! It will not be over! I'm not going to abandoned my friends, she grabbed on to a protrusion, I'm not going to leave Cadence and my brother's wedding destroyed, she shakily grabbed on to another ledge, I'm not going to disappoint the princesses, she pulled herself out of the entrance of the hole, feeling a bit more strength hearing her friends gasp, and I'm not going to leave Equestria ravaged by those sadists.

Her friends gawked at the bruised up unicorn huffing, as she slowly crawled her way out of the hole. Shining spoke up, "T-Twily!?"

Twilight huffed, "I promise you everypony..."


Hearing his thoughts, Chrysalis turned around with a smirk on her face and asked, "What do you promise my king?"


With confidence and bravery in their eyes, Twilight and Metamorphosis shouted, "This will end!"

Author's Note:

I hope you enjoyed this chapter! Please leave a comment and see you all in the finale! (Also, I know it was a weird chapter, which is why I have the why so serious pic there)

Comments ( 11 )

Awesome Job, Petitprincess! Looks the fight between Twilight & Metamorphosis has just begun. Can't wait to see who'll win! (Well it's kind of obvious who is the winner, but I won't say who. It's a Secret.) :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy:

Though I have suggestion. Can Twilight Burst into flames and become Burning Twilight (Note: The idea of Twilight being in that form cought my attention) while she's fighting Metamorphosis?

And in a random chapter later, can some of our OC make a appears either fighting off Changlings or something? Just in case you like the idea, My OC name is Greenlight "Green/GreenMint" Mintiest. :twilightsmile:

Also, think you can put the song "Cinderella Man" By Eminem for the fight scene?

(That's all I have to ask. Hope you reply back. :twilightsmile:)

6096821 I'm not allowed to use non-MLP related songs on this website, the OC would be too random to just drop into one chapter without he/she being in other chapters (plus, there's only one chapter left), and the burning Twilight I'm not really sure with. I felt like that was more of her just becoming completely enraged that she literally exploded, so, in my eyes, it wouldn't really makes sense for her to use it as an attack move. I can try to fit it in, but I'm not sure if it'll actually be in the final product. Hopefully, I answered all of your questions and I'm sorry if I have disappointed you in some way. :twilightblush:

6096869 No bullsh*t from me, but can you at least ask the others about? :rainbowhuh:

6096904 Others? What do you mean others?

6096909 Other users who has OC. :twilightsmile:

Again, No bullsh*t from me.

6096919 So, to clarify, you want me to ask other users who have OCs to use them in the chapter? I mean, don't get me wrong, I wouldn't mind using your OC it's just that since it's the final chapter it's kind of hard to put in an OC at the last minute without just feeling like it's forced, you know?

6096937 :ajbemused: *sign* I give up. Well thank you for saying something about my OC appearing in there. :twilightsmile:

(Scratch that asking other OC thing. If you want to. [And yes, that's what I mean])

No Bullsh*t from me! :pinkiehappy: Anyway, I know what you mean by Burning Twilight is her being enraged. But listen, she's focused on both Chrysalis & Metamorphosis, and not the others, which are on her side. So that's what I mean. :pinkiehappy:

You want the details of my OC and what he looks like? :twilightsmile:

6096968 I guess I'll try to fit your OC in, but it'll be more of a small cameo. Mostly because It'd be weird just to shoehorn an OC at the very last minute, but if I can't put him in don't be mad

6097004 Thank you. And hey just in case you don't know what he/I looks like. Ask me want your ready. IF you think you can fit him/me in there. :pinkiehappy:

Also he's Cutie Mark is the same on as My Avatar Icon. If you haven't notice. :twilightsmile:

Good Luck. And I promise I won't get mad if I don't appear. mmkay? :twilightsmile:

Go Twilight. It looks like the big battle is up next. Good luck.

When is the next chapter?

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