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DeathJovi
Heya! My name's Hayden. I'm a musician by trade, brony at heart, and novice writer in my free time. I love everything about music and ponies, so if you also like that hit me up! :D
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Hey guys! I'd recommend checking out the foreword I published on this fic if you have any questions regarding it. Thanks!
Woops! Should have told you where the foreword is haha. I published it under my blog, so go ahead and check that out of you're interested :D
Well, it's an interesting start, I'll admit, and the second person POV is certainly different. I'll watch, for now at least
so far, seems interesting
Who else wants to bet that the Mane 6's plan will only make things worse?
Wow. A second-person HiE sex story.
Way to push the envelope, champ.
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PFFHAHA I know right? I'm sooooooooo innovative. :d
Nah, I know I'm not doing anything that hasn't been done before. Nor do I claim to be any good at it. I just thought I'd give a shot and see if what happens. That, and I got bored haha
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Bah. The only thing more common than a "Welcome to Equestria, now go fuck something!" stories are "Twilight becomes an alicon" (pre-MMC) or "Twilight mopes about being an alicon" (post-MMC)
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What about a 'Twilight's horn and wings bitch about having to listen to Twilight mope' story?
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"Yeah, fuck this, guys; we're outta here. Just wait until she falls asleep."
*morning*
"Me am dirt-horsey now? NOOOOOOO!"
you can have a fav for now
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I shall do my best to keep it :D
4043515 With the way the story is looking so far, im sure you will
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Prepare thyself... I learned from the best of plot twisters (no innuendo intended)!
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most excellent! I shall do my best to not let you (or any of my readers, for that matter) down
4042179 Goodie! I hope to keep your interest piqued for quite sometime :D
very nice. I shall follow this story
Yes! This one still has his innocence! ...Aaaand it's about to be gone. Well I'm prepared to see the "You want me to go fuck her?" moment
4043861 PFFHAHA Oh man. I actually can't wait to show ya it! It'll be along the lines of "you want me to do what with her WHAT!?
But first! You must suffer through the biggest boner killer in literature (short of a rusty knife aimed at your junk as you read)... PLOT DEVELOPMENT!
Reader: What's this? I have to hear a story before my helping of poontang? NOOOOOOO!
Haha I kid I kid. I'm actually hoping to get something in next chapter to tide everyone over (Whoops! Should've called SPOILERS) in that regard. As well as to try out my hand at terrible sex dialogue. Won't tell ya who though! Gonna be keeping that a secret for a while ;)
4043815 And I shall follow you! To your home!
Haha just messing with ya. But thanks! I promise to try and not lead you astray.
There is a certain manic personality to the human. It's interesting and could certainly be used for solid comedy. At this point the signs point to him getting Pinkie for a mare friend. I will keep an eye on the fic and see what you can do with it. It has promise.
The writing style is interesting, but very hard to read.
I had to stop reading this for one reason. I can think in first person but I cant speak in first person? Nope, that was enough for me to dislike this. It just breaks the flow for me when the character says something without even speaking.
interesting, there is many jokes that can be found here.
4049101 ah, dang. Alright, I understand. No hurt feelings. The reason I chose to do this was to somewhat emulate one of my favorite stories, Preggity. In it, there's no direct dialogue from the character of you, but I understand the disconnect you might feel in it. It's definitely not an easy read, but thanks for stopping by anyway!
4048385 yeah, I getcha. I hope to do better in the future, especially with the chapter in working on now. The main reason this one's so convoluted is to set up the plot points more or less that I hope will tie together in the end. Thanks for reading!
4050026 Thank you! I was hoping at least some of the jokes would stick. In fact, I was quite reluctant to put the comedy of label on this story. I only ended up doing it because of the light-hearted nature I wish to convey and not because I think I'm funny. Thanks for noticing though!
4050122 Even if it is light heart comedy, it is still comedy.
Poor Big-Mac got raped. :(
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Ah have to admit, this made me chuckle quite a bit. Seems like an interesting story ya got going here and Ah'm curious to see where all it goes.
Certainly seems interesting, I would love to see more.
awe I read it all well it was riveting in all fairness
It's dead Jim.
Tangled reference!