For who knows how long, Equestria has not been involved in any foreign affairs.
But when rumors begin to float around about a bipedal creature,
Investigations are made.
And discoveries become inevitable.
(-Aside-)
I thought of this a couple days ago, so I decided why not?
But as I was writing, I thought to myself.
This thing might become huge.
Seriously though, I'm stuck between making side stories or mashing it into this one fic.
So be patient, and maybe suggest what I should do?
Critique is appreciated!
Chapters (14)
Your missing the HUMAN tag, Bro.
Cheers
~iraqlobstah
I pity the fool who will dislike this fanfic!
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Well, if you know what I'm crossing over...
I'm not sure their human so to speak, but I'll add it anyway!
370388
Thanks for the approval! I appreciate it!
I have no idea what this is a crossover of, bur I like it
370488
I was making a Mr.T joke.
370512
I know!
370509
Thanks! Let me give you a hint. It's a video game.
370520 still clueless
sry, but its Nopony... meh, unless you involve zecora, since she technically isnt a pony, but you have to say that.... gives people the wrong message
370482
"bipedal creature,"
When it comes to pony fanfiction,
What the hell else could it be?!
Cheers
~iraqlobstah
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I'm not sure what you're talking about...
370541
Here's another hint. Two in fact:
If you have steam, it's listed under "Free to Play"
370557 I'm not gonna get it, don't even have steam
370553
If you knew what I'm crossing over, you'd probably know what I mean...
370567
Ah, well. If you do manage to stumble across it, It's really under rated.
370557 You said noone. Im not a big fan of when people/ponies say nopony either, but meh. Its like a law to writers around here. Notice how in episodes the characters usually say nopony and anypony instead of noone and anyone.
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)...'one' refers to a living being...(more rambling
)...ponies are living things too...(even more rambling
)...and honestly I don't see a difference. Long story short, There are one or two cases where ponies in the show uses "anyone." I'll probably read over this piece a couple times before I'm through, and I'll change it where I feel it's necessary.
Ooh! THAT'S what you meant!
But I mean technically...(philosophical rambling
sorry if this upsets you in anyway.
OMG Spiral Knights! You sir deserve a Thumbs up!
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SOMEBODY GOT IT
Thank you! I appreciate it!
(How did you put the clapping man in the comment? it amazes me
I'm confused about this whole height thing. Is he a midget or are ponies bigger than I had origionally imagined.
Adventures in alternating chapters
372491 Troy is around 5'
370567 It's really not difficult to figure out. It's mentioned SPECIFICALLY already. Now just figure out where, and you'll be golden.
And just for the record, you may want to edit the italics code in the 9th chapter, it sort of made the rest of the chapter italicized.
371567 Eeyup, but one day someones gonna be all like "IMPROPER GRAMMAR". It is practically a law for popular stories. I dunno why, but meh.
They have curved swords, CURVED SWORDS!
376123
The best part is,
I don't even play skyrim!
372089 There is a image button on the comment screen. Copy a image URL and put it in the blank, then hit enter. And there you go, also the man is William Riker from Star Trek.
"shiny sticks and heavy plates" this would give me the impression of medieval times, but seeing that its "alpha team" one has to wonder what the heavy plates are...
516691
Any more and it would've been stripped.
Thank you I guess?
I should really get back to this story...
518398
Aye! Keep working on it!
wait what happened to spike
370567
You do not need steam. You do not even have to download anything if you do not want to.
518398
Why is such brilliance on hiatus!?!
Oh...
she just went into the clockworks...
Nice emote train, bud.
I always wanted a spur... but I want a triglav more.
I WISH TO CRUSH MY FOES WITH A MOUNTAIN.