How would you react to waking up in a dark alley with no memory of anything but a name? Then when you try to find out who you are you’re told you could be royalty? Then you start hearing voices that seemingly belong to nopony? That’s just how Hope Shine felt. Join her as she tries to find out who she is, where she came from, but soon finds a truth so shocking that even Discord would gasp from sheer surprise.
By the way, the teen rating is due to some violence later on in the story.
Chapters (9)
GAH THIS IS HORRIBLE, the grammer is too perfect, the story line makes sense, there's a hint of adventure, this is a story, and ur making it GAH
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LOLOLOLOLOL IM JUST KIDDING ABOUT THE FLUTTER RAGE
but seriously this story looks perfect in this one chapter, have a mustache for such excellence 
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Why thank you friend, would you like me to post the next chap?
Perhaps.....
RIGHT NOW!
this chapter is awesome bro
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Thanks but, did you see my previous comment?
3983835 WOULD U PLEASE???????????????????????
sir ur storymaking skills surpass even my own, it would be rude NOT to post the chapter.
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(Luna talk) Ask, and thou shalt receive good sir.
(Translation) Sure!
I am fine with your OC being an alicorn, but when are u going to upload more?
4047203
Why yes!
Just as soon as I'm Done with the next bit.
which should be soon!
Whoo, took me a while, but chapter three is finally out!
4079036
Huh?
What avatar reference?
Decent so far, but I feel like it needs more refinement.
I don't know why
Also, Dr Who cameos drive me up the wall
4087971
Only one I saw is your cover art. They're the nation symbols from Avatar: The Last Airbender.
Im sorry sir but, uhh, WHYYYYYYYY.
1. U had to name it "the checkup", I know u bro come on (Knows what pun ur chapter name is from).
2. I can't see the picture bro, u got to do something about that.
Other than that it was good, and dude that part about her eyes was a bit creepy '-' and bro, the doctor was a nice bit.
Water...
Earth...
Fire...
Air...
Long ago, the four elements lived in harmony.
Then, everything changed when the Fire Nation attacked.
Only the Avatar, master of all four elements could stop them.
But when the world-
Wait, what's that? Wrong story? Sorry, but I had to.
Still, I really like this story, and I cant wait for future updates.
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I'm sorry if that bothers you, but, it's for a good reason.
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Let me know if you would, here's a link:
Yeah yeah, I know they are, but I didn't think you guys would like the only other art I have for this story.
http://www.deviantart.com/art/Hope-Shine-434440340
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Maybe a little note that's it's not an Airbender crossover in the description? Though to be fair, thinking it was was why I clicked on it..
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Well... Thanks for clicking on it then, how did you like the story?
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BTW, I don't see why it would need to say not a crossover in the description due to the fact it has no crossover tag.
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Question. where does it need refinement?
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Why does everyone keep thinking of Avater when they read my story?
It's the cover art isn't?
Knew I should've gone with the other one.
4163229 Sorry, but even the story seems to resemble Avatar. I hope you update soon.
4163288
How?!?!?
HOW?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
I honestly don't know what similarity you people are seeing!
I only see one similarity; the fact that both protagonists control the four elements of nature.
4163329 Well, in the prologue, you mention the whatever pony to be able to call upon the '4 elements: Fire, Earth, Water, and Air.' That, besides the picture, clued me in on 'Avatar.'
4163329 Wait, you said that. Sorry. But it is still LIKE Avatar. Not exactly the same, but still similar.
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How else is it similar?
4164785 First, upload more chapters. Then we shall talk.
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Very well.
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Hey, I fixed the website link one, two I put the picture as the story art.
So, yeah, enjoy.
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New chapter here! now answer my question!
4198739 No. I said Chapters. With an 'S'. You still haven't filled your end of the bargain.
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Wow, really?
Is it really that hard for you to wait for the chapters?
I mean, as if it's that much harder to wait for the chapters to come out rather than to actually make them...
Alright, how many more chapters we talking?
P.S. BTW, if it's a ridiculous amount, I'll consider the deal pointless.
4198837 How about in 6 chapters?
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I hope that by "How about in six chapters" you mean when chapter six is out.
Because if you mean that you want me to post six more chapters, you must be out your Equestrian mind!
4198871 My Equestrian mind is certainly crazy. How about in 3 chapters?
4198871 Meaning chapter 8.
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Alright, three more chapters isn't outrageous, done.
4198925 Your pretty desperate to know what I'm going to say, aren't you?
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Dude, I could care less about what you have to say about how "similar Remember is to Avatar," quote un-quote.
I just want to know if and when you'll give me an answer to my question that you say you can answer.
4203898 Maybe...
Hey Guys!!!!
So, I decided what better way to kick off Spring Break than to post two chapters in one day!
This is for you guys, enjoy!
Gah! This story sucks! Way worse than the story I'm writing! Lol JK JK. But I am writing a story!
4245205 Cool! Is it on here?
No but it's not a pony fanfic either so...
You still there? Tell your sister to call me.
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Sorry, Got distracted with other things and, sure!
Thanks
I have to go for like half an hour. I'll message you when i'm back. BTW my fanfic is a Smosh fanfic.