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Fluttershy’s Questionably Adorable Creature Placement Service

Everypony knows that Fluttershy is the pony to ask when it comes to strange and unusual animals, but Fluttershy's self-doubt forces her to take on more than she can manage when she comes across something she's never seen before.

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Flint Sparks

Flint Sparks #1 · Feb 7th, 2014 · 6 · ·

I read the title wrong.

ThePartyCannon

ThePartyCannon #2 · Feb 7th, 2014 · · ·

3909664 I can't say I didn't make the same mistake.
As for the story, I liked it! Favoriteded.

MythrilMoth

MythrilMoth #3 · Feb 8th, 2014 · · ·

Well that was different.

This needs an editor's touch, but it's not bad.

Fuzzyfurvert

Fuzzyfurvert #4 · Feb 10th, 2014 · · ·

Read this! It'll help.

Bubble Boom

Bubble Boom #5 · Feb 12th, 2014 · · ·

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Oops, I realized the faux pas only after posting the story!

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Thank you!

3913922
Thank you for your feedback. Do you have some specific examples to help me out?

paul

paul #6 · Oct 1st, 2014 · · 1 ·

The story left me with mixed feelings - on one hand I liked nicely done slice of life with good characterization, it gave warm cozy feeling. on other hand - dark/grimdark ending clashes with the rest of the story, and frankly I personally do not like it, or even actively dislike.
the ending would be ok if you put dark or tragedy tag to story (but I would not be reading the story in that case).
As for now this is dark story which slice-of-life/comedy tags mislead reader.