• Member Since 13th Sep, 2013
  • offline last seen January 19th

Bubble Boom


Bubble Boom here. I'm a jack-of-all-trades sort of gal who writes, illustrates, edits, and crafts.

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Everypony knows that Fluttershy is the pony to ask when it comes to strange and unusual animals, but Fluttershy's self-doubt forces her to take on more than she can manage when she comes across something she's never seen before.

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 7 )

I read the title wrong. :twilightblush:

3909664 I can't say I didn't make the same mistake.
As for the story, I liked it! Favoriteded.

3909664
As did I...I figured as much when I saw it was rated "Everyone"

Well that was different.

This needs an editor's touch, but it's not bad.

Read this! It'll help.

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Oops, I realized the faux pas only after posting the story!

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Thank you! :pinkiehappy:

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Thank you for your feedback. Do you have some specific examples to help me out?

The story left me with mixed feelings - on one hand I liked nicely done slice of life with good characterization, it gave warm cozy feeling. on other hand - dark/grimdark ending clashes with the rest of the story, and frankly I personally do not like it, or even actively dislike. :pinkiesick:
the ending would be ok if you put dark or tragedy tag to story (but I would not be reading the story in that case).
As for now this is dark story which slice-of-life/comedy tags mislead reader. :fluttershysad:

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