• Published 31st Jan 2014
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No Adults - Ekluvstuff



During the Summer Sun Celebration, all the adults disappear, even all the princesses. Join the crusaders, Button Mash, spike and all the other kids in Ponyville as they deal with no adults, weird powers and a being who wants to rule them all.

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Chapter 1

Author's Note:

Enjoy!

Chapter 1

Patient 24 woke up covered in sweat. She had a nightmare about, something bad. She looked down at her hooves, a grey soft fur, and tried to remember the dream. Something about a battle and stopping someon- somepony.

Patient 24 had amnesia. Which was bad by itself but her case was even worse.

She was found two days ago, just outside of the Everfree forest, covered in bruises. She didn't know her name, she didn't know she was a unicorn until she was told, and she knew nothing about her past. All she knew was that she was 14 years old because she was found wearing with a saddlebag with a birthday card, address to an unreadable scrawl with a big purple 14 on the front of the card.

No one recognised her, not even Pinkie Pie, who usually knew ponies names.

She knew some basic history, maths and could read.

That was it. No idea who she was. She had no Cutie Mark, but she knew she used to have one. What it was a complete mystery to her.

A nurse came in to the room, with a trolley, carrying a bowl of cereal and a glass of water. "Hello, did you sleep well?" She asked.

"No, I had a nightmare, again."

"Oh, I'm sorry to hear that. How are you?"

"Ok, I'm still hoping you'll find some information on who I am. Any luck?"

"Sorry, no luck yet. I was at the Summer Sun Celebration just there."

"Mmm, is that the day that Celestia raises the Sun by any chance?"

"Yes, the longest day of the -"

She blacked out all of a sudden. Back into the nightmare. There was the monster. She must stopped him.


When she woke up, the nurse was gone. And the patient next to her was gone as well.

Patient 24 was confused. She got out of bed and looked outside

The once bustling corridor was empty. Some clipboards were on the ground. She pick one up. It said 'Patient 24' and it said all the information about her they knew. She noted that it said she talked gibberish in her sleep , had lots of nightmare, and sometimes said strange things like someone.

She put the clipboard on her back and continued down corridor. The smell of something burning came to her nose. She followed it and came to a small kitchen. A ciggerette was on the floor near a newspaper. The paper was in flames. She began to panic. She didnt want the hospital on fire.

And the flames were suddenly gone.

She began to panic. No adults, and just there with the burning newspaper and no memory to complete it all. What going on.

And deep inside her she knew she was a big part of it.


Rarity was gone. This was bad. Sweetie knew that. Who will cook, clean and buy toys for her now.

And not just her big sister, but all the adults as well. Even Celestia. One minute the town was bustling the next, empty.

All gone. With no warning at all.

And with no puff of smoke, no flash of light, no nothing.

All there one second, gone the next.

She looked at her friends. Apple Bloom was scared.

"Where's ma family?"

Her question hung in the air. All the adults were gone, without a trace. Pinkie, Bon Bon, the Mayor, even Celestia and the other princesses.

Ponyville was adult free.

Some kids were crying. Others were running in all directions. One with a red mane like Cheese Sandwich and Pinkie Pie was running towards the circus . Was he they son? Spike was on the stage, in shock. And Button was oblivious to the mayhem unraveling around him. She began to walk towards her friend.


Button Mash and Sweetie Belle were fighting a hoard of zombies, in the Campallian fortress. The high and mighty dark grey towers filled with deathly zombie archers towered over them.

"Button!"

"What!?!"

"Where all the adults gone to?"

"Their zombies, we need to find Princess Stellar who is been missing for four months and gets her to tur-"

"Ugg, Button, WAKE UP!!!"

Button Mash opened his eyes and saw Sweetie Belle starring at him. Behind her the crowd was gone except for a lot of confused children. A sense of panic, fear and chaos was in the air.

"Where's all the adults?" Asked Button.

"Nopony knows. One minute, Twilight was reading her speech and the next, Gone! No puff of smoke, no flash of light, just gone. All the adults are gone and its just the kids in Ponyville, which means..."

Oh no, thought Button. What to do.

"I can play as much games as I want for as long as I can! I'll be in Sugar Cube Corner, then Bonsweet shop, then my room. DO NOT DISTURB ME UNLESS YOU WANT TO PLAY WITH ME!!"

And with that he ran off. He didn't want to play games really, but he might anyway. What was really was on his mind was " Must hide all evidence. Must avoid everyone. Must survive."


"What was that? Why did go home when he could..." said Scootaloo.

"It's the situation, Scoot. All the other ponies are gone. Why aren't you crying or sad? Your Mom isn't here, there's no pony to tuck you into bed! You should be crying, not thinking about ... stuff."

"Mmmm, I miss my parents, I'm going home." She said. It sound false.

"Your hiding something, Scoots. You can tell me."

Scootaloo thought for hard and then said:

"I'm an orphan, ok! I had to lie. I saw you with your Mom, your Dad, Rarity. I knew you'll act different to me. I have no family, I can't fly."

She began to cry.

"It's ok. If things stay the way there are at the moment I think we all might be orphans."

She looked around. She couldn't find Apple Bloom.


There was no sign of Zercora. All she found was a broken bottle of growth potion. A large plant was growing quickly beside it.

She got her bag which she put the mask she got from Zac, a picture of her parents, her purse, a blanket, some food and three bottles of changeling potion, three of instant health potion and a potion that makes you faster, stronger and smarter. This is what she'll need for the journey.

She closed the door of her aunts hut and headed into the dark forest.


Apple Bloom was sad. She was in the kitchen. It smelt of Granny, AJ and Big Mac. Her family. Where were they. She began to cry.

Apple Jack used to say that Apples stuck together no matter what. Through the tough and thin of life. But now. Who was going to run Sweet Apple acres? Who was going to buck the trees of apples? Who was going to bake the Zap Apple jam?

She was the only Apple now. Except for Babs.

Just two Apples left in Ponyville.

"Apple Bloom? Where are you?" a,familiar voice said breaking her out of her trance.

"Babs?"

"Yay?"

"What's happening?"

"All the adults are gone, Scoot's an orphan, Button's gone playing his games and I think it's the apocalypse is beginning. Want to loot Barnyard Bargains?"

"No, maybe later."

And she and Babs weeped their eyes out.


Mom and Dad were no where to be found. Pogo found a corner in their trailer. He began to cry. His parents may be stupid, they may make him attend Clown Camp. He may hate them. But he loved them.

At least they didn't make fun of him.

He was often bullied because of his hair, his weakest, his parents. He usually stayed in a town for a month and would attended school there. He would try and be average at school. Around 70%. Usually.

When the result would come back after a test she would say "that's very good for you". Their prejudice would anger him. He could do 100% if he wanted.

It wasn't any better in the playground. The spoiled brats would say "your mane is like a crazy pony's" or " weak joke, weak crazy joke".

He stood up. Pogo Smiles wasn't going to let himself get bullied now. He'll sort his hair, go to that tree library and try and figure out what's going on.

Or he could search the knowledge.


It's plan was working.
All it needed for now was some slaves.


Zerica walked through the dark forest. She kept a lookout for trouble, the Everfree was famous for its wildlife, manticore, timberwolves, cockatrices galore. There was also poison yoke, yetis, sweeping willows and hydras. It was one of the most dangerous forests in the known world.

She always carried a blowpipe and some poisoned arrows, the typical weapon back home. You never know when a manticore will drop in for a bite.

*rustle, snap*

She quickly looked around her.

Nothing, nothing, a bunny. Oh just a bunny.

The bunny breathed fire.

What! the young zebra was confused, then scared. How is a bunny supposed to breath fire.

She ran away. Oh so far away.


No adults, chaos, has this happened before.

The knowledge never fails.

And the answers came in front of his mind.

Books. Written by so and so. There are bestsellers.

But he can't read them. What's the plot? Who or What cause them?

Is this just a copy of one of these books?

There's a movie for one. A series for the other one.

But he remembered something. The knowlegde was showing the Elements and some text. He tried to read it but it was gone before he could.

The secret of the Knowledge.


"So what will we do?"

"The adults are gone without a trace and soon all Ponyville will be in chaos. You remember the that day-"

"Don't remind me. That day was horrible. Especially the-"

"Just don't talk about it!"

The crusaders were headed to the club house because their homes reminded them of their parents. Applebloom and Babs were walking with each other, crying onto each others shoulder. Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle were talking to each other, decided what to do.

"Sweetie?"

"What Applebloom?" asked Sweetie. Applebloom hadn't talked since they found her in her kitchen, crying with Babs. Scoot had to force her to come with them.

"What's that?" She pointed her hoof towards the club house.

Sweetie looked in the direction. There was a wall, cutting through the apple trees, the ground, missing the clubhouse by inches. A blank wall. they couldn't see through it. It seemed to slimmer ever so slightly.

"Oh-o."

Comments ( 2 )

*le gasp* A Gone Crossover with MLP? You will go places my friend!

Okay, I like the idea. I read 'Gone' and a fair portion of 'Hunger.' You did pretty good (not real good, but pretty good.)
Having that said there were quite a few errors:
Prologue: It should be '...all their toys...'; 'preform' should be 'perform'; 'shuttered' should be 'shuddered'; 'theres' should be 'there is' or 'there's'; in the Pinkie Party name 'noting' should be 'nothing'; and finally, 'A plan not to get defeated by the elements again.' I am also curious about this portion, 'It will be remembered as the event that lead to the event that lead to the event that changed a lot of foals in the town of Ponyville that day,the number tripled by the summer sun celebration.' It seems you have one or two 'lead to the event' statement too many (unless I am reading it wrong, which is likely :unsuresweetie:).
Now onto Chapter 1: The statement 'I was at the Summer Sun Celebration just there.' should be 'I was just at the Summer Sun Celebration.'; the question 'Was he they son?' should be 'their son'; When Scootaloo asks "Why did go home when he could..." it should be 'Why did he go home when he could...'; you misspelled 'Zecora' once spelling it 'Zercora'; 'weeped' should be 'wept'; and lastly, in the statement, 'He was often bullied because of his hair, his weakest, his parents.' the word 'weakest' should be 'weakness' in this context.
Looking forward to more. :twilightsmile:

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