In a world where 6 ponies got to the Elements of Harmony before Celestia and Luna, the sisters discuss what they could have become.
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Wow. Nicely done.
A few grammar/spelling errors and things that didn't make sense, and the strange lingering feeling like "who were the other finders of the Elements?" and a plot hole or two, but not bad.
Upvoted.
Is this a sequel your setting up, I hope so.
4184326 No, sorry, but this is just a ramdon oneshot I did!
4185832 Well hopefully your change your mind about that some day.
4186581 Maybe, just a maybe…
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Finished reviewing this story. I'm afraid due to the grammar errors and exposition problems, I can't recommend it, but I personally loved the idea and I'd like to see you get an editor and clean it up, because there's a lot of potential here.
I've included the review here.
Again, I liked the idea, but I'd like to see it written better. Good luck.
Btw, the others might still approve this. I never know what they're going to do.