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Twilight Sparkle Discovers the Cutie Mark Crusaders have run out of ideas on how to get their cutie marks. In order to give them new inspiration Twilight takes them to Canterlot. There Princess Celestia and Princess Luna tell them the story of how they earned their cutie marks. The story takes place in the early days of Equestria following the long reign of the evil villain Ghastaloom. Princess Celestia convinces Princess Luna to go exploring in the Everfree Forest. There they encounter a sinister follower of Ghastaloom. One thing quickly leads to another and before long it's up to the two princesses to stop the vile henchman from exacting his plan of revenge.

This is a three part story.

Chapters (3)
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Comments ( 22 )

Thank you! I'm hoping to have part two ready in another day or two.

The concept is solid, but for some reason the lack of the RCV breaks immersion for me.

That was quite a good read and feels like it really did happen. congrats to you.

Thank you for the comment! I was hoping it would be enjoyable and at the same time believable!

I here by declare this needs a DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA'WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW:pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::raritystarry::raritystarry::trollestia::trollestia:

Why Thank you! It's been a while since anyone commented on my first fic! :twilightsmile:

How can somepony not it is great story I an favoring it:twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiesmile::pinkiesmile::raritywink:

Wow, that was pretty good. I can picture this as an actual episode, especially how it began and how it ended. Nice job!

This was a really good story, but I have to say, you've come a long way as an author, keep it up.

I know what you mean. This was the first fic I posted here on FIMfiction. :twilightsheepish:

:duck: its okay i like it so far good job:twilightsmile:

:derpyderp1: i like it five mustaches for you :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

This was the very first fic I posted on here. :twilightsheepish: I've come a long way since I wrote this story. :eeyup: Glad you enjoyed it! :yay:

seems pretty good so far....:twilightsmile:

Seems great so far. Need to read more.

Sweet story. I'm guessing this was an earlier work? Like when you were starting out?

This was and still is my very first fic posted here on FIM. It really needs a lot of work. I've come a long way since I wrote this story. :twilightsheepish:

Yeah I can tell. The 2 others I've read from you show how much skill you've gained since then

This gargoyle is WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY overpowered. :trollestia:

That's because he was one of Ghastaloom's most powerful henchmen and looking to settle the score for his defeated master. :pinkiehappy:

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