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Pokko


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Aria is a filly who has no friends and never talks to anybody. She's abused at home by her father, and her mother died while giving birth. Often aria gets blamed for it. To make matters worse, she is bullied by her fellow classmates at school. Her teachers make snotty remarks about her grades. One day, she overhears a remark from a filly which pushes her over the edge. Once out of school, she quickly makes her move and runs with nothing but a full backpack.
(And despite the image,she's a unicorn filly .)

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 13 )

Please make more its sad BUT I LOVE IT:raritycry:

I do it on a tablet and to me this is great

A. M. A. Z. I. N. G Kep going!:pinkiehappy:

There are a few grammer mistakes but I fricken dont CARE just gonna read this story:pinkiehappy:

A good story so far, my only grief is that the latest chapter seems a tad rushed. Take some time, add some details and this will be one excellent story.

I am enjoying this alot. Be careful when you make mistakes. Some here really need to be changed or it looks like a 5 year old did it. Keep going! Never give up!:pinkiehappy:

Comment posted by Cade117 deleted Feb 3rd, 2014

Wait so they're omnivores?:rainbowhuh:


3889523 Just her father is. Aria is a forced omnivore (her father makes her eat the meat). Keep in mind Arias father is a (illegal) hunter, so he has meat on his mind all the time.

I love this story can u make a sequel pleeeeeeeeaaaaaaasssssseeee ( ugh I sound like a creeper)
This 7s nice and I wanna find out what happens whith her dad:pinkiehappy:
DAMN THAT TERRIBLE FATHER U SHOULD BE ASHAMED TO BE CALLED "DAD" :flutterrage:
That is what I would say if I ever saw him:pinkiecrazy:

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Of course! Im busy but I'll try to do it when possible.

3906173 Thanks. Keep up the good work. Make me proud you complete stranger!:heart:

Only two things wrong with this: grammar and pacing. Other than that, very good. I like it. :twilightsmile:

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