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Late thanksgiving dinner

November is the most hectic month for all the ponies, even the lazy blue pegasus. So they decide to have a late thanksgiving dinner in December.
Except they don't invite Pinkie pie. But theres no was she's gonna find out? Right?
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Note: I won't continue the story, although you can make up the ending.

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Crimson Dawn

Crimson Dawn #1 · Dec 20th, 2013 · · · Caught red handed! ·

You need to separate the different characters dialogue. Each character talking should be its own paragraph so that it is easier to understand and enjoy.

Penjacker

Penjacker #2 · Dec 20th, 2013 · · · Caught red handed! ·

What Crimson said. Also, not inviting Pinkie is really OoC for the others. Thanksgiving is a time for togetherness, is it not? Final thing is the turkey. Unless it's a veggie turkey for some reason, this should go.

Zeyon The Green