i'm a brony who just wants to have fun, and make stuff people can enjoy
When catasterfy and mayham out rule the law department, a two year long murder epidemic claims its victums, one at a time. reaching more rapid intervules of killing, the law department gets another shot after three months of silance and peace.
when you add a socal case and a blind girl to the mix, you can really see the spark of things.
Please read and rate appropriatly. :)
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Very interesting. I'm very curious about Clockwork's motive and end-game
I'm hoping Silver is unsuccessful in stopping Clockwork as I'd prefer to have another crime play out as the story progresses. It's a lot like Dexter but with a pattern/puzzle killer
... who's a pony. On that note he doesn't seem very cautious, I'd like to see how that plays out. So yup, exited for the next part.
3747538 i love how you just called out half the plot in you're own mind while i'm going to kill 101% of that! 101% you say? thats 51% more than you thought you got right!
but i plan on having plot twist, and killings will happen later on
, but will it be silver note striking down Clockwork/Xivi? or will Xivi kill Silver note!?
oh and P.S. drac is card backwards, and Xivi is (XIVI)11:60. so basicly 12:00
MUHAHAHA
clockwork spelt backwards is krowkcolc(crow colck).
3746596 its out
3747615 This needs more corpses hanging from pickaxes in the eye socket.Over frozen watermelons. At least thats my option.
3747996
why over frozen watermellons?
unless yoiu mean heads that have basicly cracked thier skull
more to COME later bro
Opinions, you say? Very well, I shall deliver.
Chocolate is superior to vanilla. Life runs better on caffeine. Proper grammar is the way of heaven. Luna is best pony.
ENJOY THINE OPINIONS, CITIZEN!
3753326
all of those are not opinions.
chocolete always surpasses vinnila.
and trixie is best unicorn
thankd for the opinion and fave
3753345 denver.mylittlefacewhen.com/media/f/rsz/mlfw1738_large.png
3753430 she's gonna have to get past the grate and powerfull trixie first
3751362 No, actual frozen watermelons.
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WHAT DOSE IT MEAN!?
3753345 you are wrong good sir mint chocolate chip is the best ice cream
is best pony for she is weaponized cuteness equal to a 20000 kiloton hydrogen bomb
also
got done reading this chapter
grammar, pacing, and character: everything is fine
errors:
the major grammar error I see Is the any I that begins was lower cased, that is incorrect for any I that starts a word or is by itself should be capitalized.
spelling errors:
[quote"Witch rule can be broken sometimes?" ]Witch should be which
should be seen
why anyone if it's just Xivi/Clock Work and Silver Note in the room?
pane is misspelled once again
misspelled words his, mind, guest, necessary, and dying