• Member Since 15th Oct, 2011
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LCranston


An author of intense Rescue Ranger fanfics trying his hand at MLP:FIM fanfics.Comments and criticisms are much appreciated for any story submissions of mine.

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The Great and Powerful Trixie is no longer so great or powerful. In fact, she is destitute. A chance meeting in Ponyville's restaurant gives Twilight Sparkle the urge to do right by her former rival.

However, Princess Celestia objects to Twilight taking an apprentice of her own. How will Twilight fare in the large horseshoes of a teacher instead of just being a student?

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 16 )

woah... evil ending... i must have more. trixy went evil.:trixieshiftright: cool story brony.

SEQUEL

NOW '

DO IT DO IT DO IT DO IT DO IT

MAKE A SEQUEL OR ILL GO OVER TO YOUR HOUSE... AND.. uhmn... CUT YOU!

Please? :fluttershysad:

I love comments. Thank you, everyone. :twilightsmile:

I think this story does beg a sequel. However, I have to split my time between coming up with the rest of the chapters for "A Place for Everything and Everyone" and my civic duty to clean up Arkham City. :flutterrage: Take that, Two-Face!

I was hesitant about this story and then i read it then i was all like :pinkiegasp: and i loved it gj

"She nuzzled the little shoes, relishing the scent of her lost child." :unsuresweetie:

Insane PotO-masked terminator Trixie?
:trixieshiftleft: ME GUSTA :trixieshiftright:

Very Nice so far. I can't wait to finish. You've set things into a wonderful mood.

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she sounds like shes fixing an inanimate object when she writes that letter

Interesting. I was expecting Trixie to betray Twilight at some point, but not like this. I would like a sequel.:pinkiehappy:

Very nice, it feels like the characters reactions were all pretty good, and I've read a lot of these feel bad for Trixie fics, and Ithink how you got her backstory in there was easily one of the best:raritywink:

I think its funny, backed up in a corner by a giant rampaging manticore and the citizens of ponyville take the time to insult and heckle others, it is actually exactly what i would expect

What? It was really good until now, although I was thinking it needed some conflict I think the battle was a little over the top and sudden, and violent

Twi, ya should have listened to your mentor. Trixie had nobody to guide her or teach her how to handle great power. :trixieshiftright: :twilightoops:

I see a bad moon rising. I see trouble on the way. I see earthquakes and lightnin'. I see bad times today.

Gotta love CCR.

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