• Member Since 15th Oct, 2011
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LCranston


An author of intense Rescue Ranger fanfics trying his hand at MLP:FIM fanfics.Comments and criticisms are much appreciated for any story submissions of mine.

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Fluttershy has a problem with courage. Even the simplest things are scary to her. Eventually, even her own mind is fed up with this behavior. After a new stallion comes to Ponyville for a visit, her mind decides to take charge and explain things to her in a way that only dreams can do.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 6 )

I always write the entire story all at once. I post it the same way. :eeyup:

It prevents me from writing a few chapters and then losing momentum, leaving an unfinished story.

I always hated it when an author starts a great story, but then never finishes it because they lost the inspiration. :twilightangry2::raritydespair::applecry:

"It was duck, but there was plenty of light to see."
Well then. :moustache:

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Oops. Thanks for the tip. No matter how many times a story gets proofread, something always slips through. :twilightblush:

As she settled into bed, she wondered to herself why everypony was so nosy. If she wanted to takes things extra slowly, then what was the big deal? It’s not like anything will go wrong.

Tempting fate a little aren't we?

Sorry that I never got to mention this, but I really did love this story from beginning to end.

It was odd seeing rap section with the Cutie Mark Crusaders, but I think it works with the story. Fluttershy's reaction to them was pretty funny! As well as when she joins them in the singing.

I am interested in Moonlight Verse. He seems to be quite the character. Especially for his date with Fluttershy at the end.

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