Hello! My name is Caleb; I am a teenager who lives in America, likes to read, write, and play video games. Oh, and my obsessive love of ponies is in there somewhere too.
Twilight Sparkle has been reading many action novels lately, and now she wants to learn how to use the traditional weapon of action novels- the sword. After a few days of studying and trying to read up on technique, she asks her big brother to teach her, but for some reason she can't seem to get it right...
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This is a decent little story, but it needs editing. Even in the first paragraph there are some cringeworthy errors. On the whole it's fairly well-written, but the errors which are present stand out in sharp contrast.
Can't give it a like due to the lack of proofreading, but did enjoy reading it.