Verse Jumper is an Earth Pony with several mysterious abilities, strange to both himself and his friends. Also, a race known as the Demon Ponies now exist, living in the city of Xenoir, and Fireball is their prince. One other mentionable tidbit is the fact that Twilight knows Verse personally, along with Luna (obviously). If I remember anything else important, I will update the description
This is really a fic for my friends. The universe has been affected by the many RP's we've had together, but nothing too major. This my first fic ever, so I'd love some pointers. Thanks for reading.
EDIT: Got a hold of a wonderful editor who is taking the time to revise and clean up the current and future chapters, hopefully this will improve the quality of the story and make it more enjoyable to any of you awesome readers out there ^^.
Before reading, do you ever explain how the universe has been changed by these RPs, or do you just kind of jump right into things?
3714524 ok, fixed the description, sorry, I practically posted this past midnight XD a little sleepy
I prettied it up just a little bit. Thanks.
It's a wall of text, use this to learn how to avoid it and make the story more appealing for a reader.
3801091 alright, i'll keep that in mind, i'm used to rp-ing with large walls of text, so i haven't been keeping proper literary structure in mind, i'll do my best to improve on that.
The guards are actually right. Verse should be in deep trouble, but the princesses are playing favourites with him.
If he can't control his anger at mere words he has no business being a guard himself.
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Noted ^^ I promise now that I've taken some time to practice, and now am no longer feeling pressured by the weight of education, that the next chapters will be of higher quality, and loaded with continuity fixes, thanks for reading!