Spike is going to tell Rarity about his feelings and takes her out on a date. After all, the date isn´t ending well and Spike ends up running into the Everfree Forest, where he meets Chrysalis. Things get really bad and Spike must fight with his own guilt from losing the thing he loves most in the world because of his own anger and pain. Can Spike fight his feelings of hate against himself....or will he lose the fight.
- Sadfiction
- Death
- little bit of gore in one or two chapters
This is my first fanfic i post on Fim-Fiction...i´m super nervous how you guys think of it.
I don´t know when i continue, but i will.
Chapters (2)
Please do go on
Fix your damn grammar. I love the story, but please fix the grammar.
3696279 I will thank you very much for the Comment
3696289 I will thanks for your comment
3696290
Find an editor at the editor's group. They'll help you fix up the grammar.
3696314 thank you
3696324
I hope you continue this.
No problem
3696326 i definitely will ^^
3696289 Oy you don't have to be rude and as the Deadman 1996 said English is not their first launguage. I think it was very nice your besr bet would be to find an editor or just ask for Grammer Nazi comments (they are sometimes very rude beware)
3696690 thank you for your comment ^^ well there are some grammar errors, but i´ll try my best to correct them
3696701 No worrys I always enjoy reading a good Fic starring Spike and you are trying to do it in a lauguage that breaks it's own rules every five syllabals. But don't listen to people who are rude or obcene when they type/talk to you they are a waste of time and brain power.
3696798 thank you very much, I really appreciate it
What is that image from?
3727309 http://metal-kitty.deviantart.com/art/Meet-the-Spyro-P5-401459960
This comment is to Deadman1996 and also to Sean66067: sorry for my behavior. I am unorthodox ans anti-social, with some really weird ways, but in the end I can give good results. I mean, my parody of "Cupcakes" sucked. I need more writing experience. Anyways, carry on with the story, but dedicate some time ob fixing the grammar please.
3729585 thank you for your text. Let me assure you that I haven´t taken your comment as harmful. It´s alright ^^ you told me what sucked and thats the way it is. If I wouldn´t want such comments I wouldn´t post my story here