Twilgiht feels bad about treating Rainbow Dash the way she did so when she goes too apologize her life changes in way that she never would have thought.
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Why I have the feeling that Scarlet is going to cause, in a way or another, trouble.
So, hey, I might be able to edit things for you. You've definitely gotten better since the previous chapters, but there's still quite a few mistakes suck as missing commas, incorrect punctuation, missing quotation marks, out of place quotation marks, and spelling errors.
This story is getting better and better keep up a good work update more soon. Five star for how great this story is.![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)