• Published 8th Jan 2014
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The Love of a Family - Ahpex



Twilgiht feels bad about treating Rainbow Dash the way she did so when she goes too apologize her life changes in way that she never would have thought.

Comments ( 3 )

Why I have the feeling that Scarlet is going to cause, in a way or another, trouble.

So, hey, I might be able to edit things for you. You've definitely gotten better since the previous chapters, but there's still quite a few mistakes suck as missing commas, incorrect punctuation, missing quotation marks, out of place quotation marks, and spelling errors.

This story is getting better and better keep up a good work update more soon. Five star for how great this story is. :twilightsmile:

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