The voice of Celestia resonated in my head as I flew down the trench of the Death Star. “Use the force, Dawn.”
I moved the small wooden airplane between the books I had set up in the crusader club house. Scootaloo was leaning forward to get a better look and threatened to topple over onto my recreation of the famous scene.
“Dawn! Your targeting computer is off!” Admiral Twilight’s voiced cracked through the radio, sounding panicked.
“It’s okay,” I replied.
“The force is strong in this one.” Queen Chrysalis continued to weave left and right, keeping my ship in her crosshairs.
“Look out!” Scootaloo shouted.
“Haha, it’s okay, Scootaloo, just let me tell the story, alright?”
I had to keep my ship steady as I aimed for the exhaust port. I heard my dashboard beeping, warning me that Chrysalis got a target lock. Any second now I was going to be vaporized!
There was a loud explosion and a scream over the communicator. “Awww yeah!” I saw Chrysalis’ ship spinning out of control in the rear view display.
“Dash?” I asked.
“You didn’t think I’d let you have all the fun and get all the credit, did you, kid?”
“Thanks.” I focused on the exhaust port up ahead, pulling the trigger to fire off two proton torpedoes. They zoomed down the exhaust port as I pulled up, locking my wing together and maxing out the throttle.
“Party’s over. Get clear of the death star!” I shouted.
All the ships from the Solar Rebellion pulled away, leaving the death moon built by Nightmare Moon behind. Moments later, a deafening explosion filled the area.
“But sound can not be transmitted through a vacuum,” Sweetie Belle corrected.
“Oh yeah? But I can use the force to lift objects with my mind?” I retorted.
“Yeah, unicorns do that all the time.”
“Oh come on!” Scootaloo shouted. “Let Dawn finish the story!”
I flew back to the rebel base, where I got a gold medal for saving the Solar Rebellion from the Lunar Empire.
“The end.”
“Aww, that can’t be the end! What about Nightmare Moon or Queen Chrysalis? What happened to Celestia?” Scootaloo asked.
“Yeah, we want to know!” Twist added.
I looked around at all the fillies and colts from Cheerilee’s class. I could have sworn it was just me and the CMC when I’d started my story. Now, there were twelve children and Pinkie Pie listening.
“Look, there are more stories, but that one took a lot of energy out of me.”
“What about Lord Chrysalis? Why’d she go all evil like? Is there a story about that?”
I winced. “Uh… no. That was the first movie. You’ll just have to use your imagination.”
“What about Dash? She shot King Sombra and killed him,” Diamond Tiara pointed out. “Isn’t that murder?”
“What, was Dash supposed to wait for Sombra to shoot first?” Scootaloo asked.
“Come on, fillies, it’s not important. What is important is that this story accurately portrays my life before I moved to Ponyville.” I looked over at Pinkie. “Right?”
“Absototalutely! Dawn was a fighter pilot in outer space before this,” Pinkie said.
“Alright, I think everyone should head home. I have stuff to do,” I said.
Pinkie and I waited for everypony to leave, before walking off towards Ponyville. I had spent the entire morning hanging out with the children and it had taken a lot of energy. The fillies in this town have a reputation, mostly from the Cutie Mark Crusaders, of being trouble makers.
“So, Dawn,” Pinkie said. “I heard Fluttershy said no to your date.”
I sighed, having not told her why Fluttershy turned me down. Apparently only me and Dash knew she was into mares and I planned to keep it that way. “No biggie, there’s plenty of mares in town.”
“At least you’re not all sad and mopey about it. So I was thinking…” Pinkie jumped in front of me so I had to stop walking and stand still. “Why don’t I get you a blind date?”
“Uh, I guess. . .”
“Nuh-uh, no guesses! Do or do not, there is no guess!”
“Celestia, what have I done? Now you’re going to be stealing all my Star Wars references.” I facehoofed and shook my head.
“Well, I told you I’d rather hear a story about vampires and werewolves.”
“No, you really wouldn’t. And yeah, so when is it?”
Pinkie smiled. “Sugarcube Corner at seven! You’ve gotta Pinkie promise to be there and I’ll find the bestest mare ever!”
“Sure, Pinkie promise to be there. It’s cross my heart and hope to fly, stick a cupcake in my eye, right?”
“Yep!” Pinkie ran off, only remember when she was forty yards away to shout back, “Thanks, Dawn! See you later!”
I shrugged and continued towards my house. I’m sure Pinkie would find a perfectly nice mare for me to date. My mind couldn’t help but wander to Rainbow Dash. Of all the mares in the town there were only two I really cared about, and one of them turned out to be lesbian. I hoped the nine-mares-to-one-stallion ratio didn’t mean most mares swung for the other team.
My stomach grumbled when I noticed a patch of wildflowers, recalling how tasty they were. The bright red and yellow flowers ahead of me would make a suitable lunch. Since they grew against the edge of the Everfree, I doubt I was eating anypony’s prized garden.
I made short work of that patch of flowers. It tasted like honey and strawberry. I followed the edge of the forest towards my house, finding a patch that looked more like roses. The white and pink ones were quite delicious, reminding me of a vanilla potpourri my mom had favored when I was a kid.
My mind wandered as I sampled every flower I could find. I’d managed to find one of every color and several different species. My favorite were light blue flowers with long white stamen. They tasted like dark chocolate covered blueberries, and I ate more of them than any other flower I sampled.
My stomach was feeling full so I left the edge of the Everfree and went back to my house. When I let myself inside I found Bagheera waiting for me, or more accurately waiting for me to feed him. I went into the kitchen and poured him some cat food. He rubbed himself around all four of my legs as I did so, making it a tad difficult.
Once back in my living room I plopped back on my couch and glanced through some books I had borrowed from the library. There was one in particular on myths and legends that I had checked out.
Of the many fables in the book, several referenced humanoid creatures. They seemed to be a bit of a “Big Foot” or “Loch Ness Monster” here in Equestria. Ponies would often see something they couldn’t identify, and imagine scary creatures that stood on two legs. According to myth, they were extremely intelligent, often tricking ponies into their own death via pits with spikes on the bottom or other gruesome things.
I opened up the book to the marker I had left. One of the most promising myths was of a Slender Human that wandered the forest. Deep down I knew this was all superstition and folk lore, yet at the same time, these legends were about me and my people. Perhaps one of them would provide insight into humanity, and how to get back to Earth.
Slender Human would stalk ponies for weeks, appearing in the corner of their eye or late at night. Anypony who went out during the night time would vanish for two days. When they returned, they were too frightened to speak. They would mutter about belly rubs and long, scratchy fingers. As one of the few myths not playing up to the predatory nature of unknown creatures, it was most promising.
“Wow, reading children’s books now, Dawn?”
I sighed, recognizing the voice. “They’re not children’s books, Dash, it’s research. By the way, didn’t your mother teach you to knock?”
“Dunno, I grew up with my dad,” Dash replied.
“Sorry.”
“Eh, no problem. I just didn’t expect you to be an egghead. Maybe Twilight messed the spell up.”
I closed the book and leaned over the back of the couch to face her. “Why don’t you come over here and sit down. I can teach you to read Equestrian.”
She huffed as she landed and walked over to me. “I know how to read! You, on the other hoof, can barely fly and you missed practice again this morning.”
“Sorry, I was telling the Crusaders about Star Wars and got carried away.”
“Star what?” Dash asked.
“You know, Star Wars. You’re a smart-ass fly-mare who is the fastest pony in the galaxy known as Dash Solo in the story.”
“Go on.”
“Well, you’ve got a side-kick named Flutterbacca—I know, I couldn’t think of a better name—that’s covered in beautiful long pink hair.”
“Pfft, sounds like some silly wish fulfillment to me.”
“Hey! That movie was a classic, I read all the books—”
“Egghead,” Dash interrupted.
I jumped over the couch, getting the drop on her. I landed, knocking her back, and pinning her to the ground. “Why don’t you say that to my face?”
She smirked. “Egghead.”
I felt two hooves lift me into the air by my stomach, and landed on the floor moments later. Dash came over and landed on my chest, standing over me.
“That is why you’re an egghead. You need to practice your flying and exercise more, or you’ll have those puny little muscles forever.”
“Fine, you win. Can we go practice now?”
“Yeah, let’s go.”
Dash walked out my front door as if she owned the place, leaving me to follow behind and close the door.
At last I could relax a little and enjoy the sunshine. The weather is nearly always a perfect eighty degrees, with a slight northern breeze, in Ponyville. The pegasi take great pride in the weather doing exactly what they want, when they want it.
There was a patch of clouds overhead in an otherwise empty sky, and I realized Dash must have put them there. She had already taken off towards them so I flew after her. Once I reached the cloud I landed in the middle of it.
I still wasn’t used to standing on clouds. They weren’t soft so much as they were like a strong gust of wind. A blanket you could feel; it was fuzzy or scratchy or warm. A cloud you could see, and stand on, yet it was so light and insubstantial that it felt like you were just flapping your wings in a steady hover.
My mind continued to ponder the cool mist that I was standing on. I laid down on it, nearly falling asleep. It felt like the cool side of the pillow, only it supported my entire body without putting any pressure on it.
“Hey, I didn’t bring you up here to nap,” Dash said.
“Well if you didn’t want me to nap, why’d you make the clouds so damn comfortable?”
She sighed, and stomped a hoof in my cloud, causing it to vanish. After free falling for a few seconds I managed to catch myself and fly back up to her.
“Hey!”
“These clouds are for bucking. I made them thin to help you out. You need a job, not to mention a cutie mark, and if you’ve got half my talent you’ll manage to figure out how to bust a cloud.”
I nodded, and flew next to the cloud to her left. “Okay, so I just kick it while somepony is trying to enjoy a nap?”
“Pretty much. Then, if that pony is me, you get your flank kicked.”
“Fair enough. How hard can it be to bust a cloud?”
The cloud was floating gently on the breeze towards me. I turned around and kicked it with both hooves. They punched right through it, covering my fur in a fine mist of water. The cloud remained intact.
“Gwahaha! What horrible aim,” Dash observed.
I kicked the tuft of cloud off my hind legs, then turned around and flew through the main part of the cloud. I punched a hole through it, turning it into a donut.
“Oh, this is priceless!” Dash landed on a cloud so she could roll onto her side and laugh.
She shouldn’t have taken her eyes off me. I flew up to her cloud, and focused mentally on the image of the cloud evaporating when I kicked it. As I spun around, my hooves seemed to tingle slightly until they contacted the cloud. There was a loud yelp and something falling through the air. By the time I turned around, the cloud had completely vanished and a very confused Dash was plummeting through the air.
One of the benefits of being a stunt pony was knowing how to recover from a tumble. Dash had already started zooming towards me, and I wasn’t nearly fast enough to get out of her way. She hit me in the side, knocking me onto a nearby cloud, where I landed with a thud.
Dash hovered overhead, forelegs crossed. “That was a cheap shot, but at least you figured out how to manipulate the weather. There may be hope for you after all, Dude.”
“Oh come on,” I whined. “Not that nickname again.”
“Then stop making it so fun to tease you with, Dude.”
I covered my eyes with a foreleg and sighed. “Alright, you got me. You got anything more useful to teach?”
“Yeah, it involves wind current, drag, and the mechanics of flight.”
“Wait, you know aerodynamics?” I got to my hooves and stared at her. “Looks like you’re the real egghead here.”
“Pfft, just because I don’t care about things like math or history doesn’t mean I’m stupid enough not to study meteorology or aerodynamics. I am a regional weather manager after all, and that requires a four year degree.”
I began to laugh, slapping a hoof on the cloud. “You. . . you. . . Stop. College?!” I laughed some more, trying to get the image of Dash wearing black-rimmed glasses out of my head. Just imagining her hitting the books was too much.
“Hey!” Dash was blushing profusely at this point. I would guess she doesn’t talk a lot about her college education, on account of wanting everypony to see her as a stunt mare and not an egghead.
“Sorry, I just didn’t expect you to you know. . . I mean, you always struck me as an athlete.”
“Well, I did get in on an athletic scholarship. I don’t usually talk about it much. Most ponies don’t really care about education, they just find a special talent and do that the rest of their lives. I always wanted more—challenges to overcome, races to win—so when my father challenged me to finish college and become a regional weather manager like him. I did.”
“Thanks for sharing that. I’m surprised I don’t remember more about you after all that happened.”
“Well, I remember enough about you for the both of us, so let’s agree not to go telling everypony I’m an egghead, or else.”
I put my hooves up in mock surrender. “You win! Now, what was that you were gonna teach me next?”
It was eight by the time I got home, thoroughly exhausted from all the flight techniques, exercise, and general rough-housing with Dash. I had to admit she really knew her stuff when it came to all things flying.
My sofa was as far as I made it after locking the door. I could already tell my muscles were going to be sore in the morning. My plan hadn’t been to fall asleep on the sofa, but I couldn’t help it. It was so soft and warm.
At some point I felt my cat climb onto the couch, before falling back asleep.
I see what you did there
it seems that he ate poison joke i think i know where this is going
Did he just break Pinkie Promise?
Pinkie said to be at the corner by seven, and he got home at eight...
Ooooooh lord...
Looking forward to some Zecora in the next couple of chapters.
Yea, he did just miss his appointment with Pinkie...
Plus going to sleep with a belly full of poison joke. This won't end well at all.
looks like he is in the shit now with pinkie.... run bro RUN!!
Dawn! You Pinkie Promised to be at Sugarcube Corner at seven and you never showed!
Oh no! He missed his date! More importantly, he broke a Pinkie Promise! May his pitiful soul rest in piece(s).
I also was really looking forward to seeing who Pinkie would set him up with. I had a sneaky suspicion it would actually be her... but I'm not 100% positive on that. I guess we'll find out in the next chapter!
Dawn.....did you really just break a Pinkie Promise?!
May Celestia Have Mercy on Your Soul, You Poor, Clueless Fool, Because Pinkie Pie Most Certainly Won't.
So, he just ate poison joke and read about Slenderman, within the span of about five minutes? Yeah, next chapter's gonna be fun.
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Don't forget he broke a Pinkie Promise. (se my last comment)
Dude just broke a pinkie promise
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Time to run...
Dammit EVERYONE breaks the Pinkie Promise! They NEVER learn!
But on the other hand...Dawn just ate Poison Joke...so he MIGHT be able to pull off an excuse for this one.
EDIT: Argblarg someone else beat me to these exact points.
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I had the same suspicion, you're not crazy.
I see what you did there.
Oh, Celestia, no. He broke a Pinkie Promise. He is doomed! And if his blind date was secretly Pinkie Pie, no pony in the world would be able to save him from her wrath. Rest in pieces, Dawn.
KBO.
Dawn Broke the pinkie promise...
Guess we'll have lots of 'Cupcakes' tonight
I think the Po-Jo is the only excuse Pinkie would accept for breaking a Pinkie Promise.
It was eight by the time I got home DAWN YOU FOOL, YOU BROKE A PINKIE PIE PROMISE!
I bet Don's going to wake up as Slenderman...
It's time to make...Slim Cupcakes!!
3819817 If poison Joke tastes like how it was described, It'd be worth it.
3819722 Ouch. Poor mystery mare.
3819684 What is that?
OHSHIT NIGGA
HE DUN GOOFED
Not mentioning the broken pinkie promise, it's been done enough.
Explosions can't be done in the vacuum space, but nobody complains about that.
Sombra shot first....
This story is still a better love story than the most likely implied Twilight series
But seriously Kaiden, have you ever thought of writing comedy stories for a living?
3819947 RUN! RUN FOR YOUR LIFE! YOU BROKE A PINKIE PROMISE!
I think dash is being a bit too bitching
Oh no pinkie promise broken
He dead lol
Cant wait for next chapter Hope your moving is going well
He probably has a higher chance of survival entering his dead human body now.
Wait no... he got home by eight! GAME OVER MAN GAME OVER
True story, eh?
Looks like somepony's been taking lessons from Gulliver.
Broken Pinkie Pie promise + Poison Joke (Pay attention to the flower descriptions if you doubt this) = Dawn... you done goofed...
Though he did break a Pinkie Promise, Pinkie Pie knows how hard it is to choose between friends. Sure 'Too Many Pinkie's' wasn't exactly like Dawn's fuck up, but maybe she might be sympathetic?
Orrrr...... she might go fucking insane
This guy is such a flake.
He needs to get it together and grow some responsibility.
Great story so far. I look forward to more irresponsibility and Pinkie death.
3819837 As did I. If this is actually the case, then I'm thoroughly looking forward to how the ensuing conflict is dealt with
Oh dear celestial, the poor guy. The wrath of pinkie, if he were to play off the whole poison joke and dash thing, maybe he can get away, depending on how he plays his words. Also, slendy?! Whoa! If PInkie the blind date, OMG! But if not, I wonder who. Dollar for derpy! Or Bon Bon. But, if pinkie insisted him being a mare, would it be a stallion?!
3820043 its motherfucking monty python
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Thanks 6␣9
3820149 poison joke is all blue
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it dosen't have a white stem
3820065 ....Sombra.....did... NOT SHOOT FIRST!!!!!
3820363 hmm... I stand by my previous conclusion if it's all the same to you. I have an odd feeling that Dawn is gonna wake up and find the gender of his name being slightly more appropriate...
3820376 yea it might be writer error so he may have just mis described it
With that reference up top, and the broken Pinkie Promise, I'm betting Dawn wakes up tied to a cross in Ponyville square.
Either that or he shall be stoned for
saying the name of our lord allahEr... I mean. OW! HEY He's the one that said it, not me! OUCH! Put those stones down! YEOW! You're wearing a fake beard! You're no man! OW!Loved the star wars references, also thanks for the update and cant wait to see what happens next!!!
Dawn woke up, everything looked... bigger?
"What the hay?" his voice, his voice sounded... like that of a small girl. Then he tried to move and noticed how small his body looked, with difficulty, he walked to see himself in the mirror.
"You got to be kidding me!" Saw saw the reflexion of a small pegasus filly looking at him from the mirror.
It has already begun.
3819711 Goodness I hope so poison joke and a broken pinkie promise? The next chapter is going to be amazing!
3819791 I actually had a similar suspicion...but yeah Pinkie is gonna kill him
Oh God, he broke a Pinkie Promise. THE PINK DEMON WILL HAVE HIM.
Dawn, you messed up my friend.
You made a pinkie promise and broke it.
Now pinkie is out to get you.
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Sometimes I think you might be reading my mind. I'm looking forward to the next dream sequence.
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I'm debating if it'd be "appropriate" for Pinkie to BDSM Dawn for breaking the Pinkie Promise. I really miss cloptional chapters.
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Well, light blue stamen, but at least you can see how I misjudged it at a quick glance when re-watching the episode.
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Yes, I've thought of writing for a living :) It'd be a lot of fun, and also this will be the greatest love story in the history of Pony. Maybe.
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I wasn't subtle enough... the next Monty Python reference will be much more obscure.
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He will actually go on the next blind date. Time for some Dawn x Background Pony shipping, while he tries to fill the hole in his heart left by and .
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That's actually one of the arcs. I think most readers can relate to not wanting to take responsibility, and he's in some sort of foreign utopia and (soon to be) dealing with some big issues.
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Pinkie incoming! (you guys will like what actually happens.)
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I love writing Zecora, rhymes are cool.
I'm also no fool.