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Yosh-E-O


I am aspiring author who enjoys writing various works of fantasy in which have a cutesy touch

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This story is a sequel to Love's True Form


Princess Celestia has long been one to not meddle in the business that was once her's to begin with.

Whether it be "Nightmare Moon", "Discord", "King Sombra", or even the "Elements of Harmony" themselves, Celestia has been vague, at best, while relying on Twilight and her friends to figure things out and save the day.

After what happened during "Love's True Form", Celestia finally decides it is time to stop keeping secrets and opens up on the origins of Spike and the true destiny she has planned for Princess Twilight Sparkle

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Comments ( 7 )

A little fast in pace,:rainbowlaugh: could add a bit more depth in the players environment,:derpytongue2:
Keep going:pinkiehappy:

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Agreed. :unsuresweetie: This story was meant to supplement "Love's True Form" but definitely could've benefited from a little more effort on my part to properly pull it off. :facehoof:

Thanks much for your thoughts. One cannot improve without input. :twistnerd:

To be honest seems a bit more confusing than adding more, but if the next story, which I assume there will be one, is written, it would probably make more sense.

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I'm not sure. After this story I felt a bit upset with myself for taking Spike and Rarity into a sexual relationship. So I back peddled to doing some sillier, cutesy works before finally getting to where I'm at now with Ari Kunofsky's "Fallen Angel" series.

6379096 there is nothing wrong with a sexual relationship, not even in this case, especially with how you explained it. If your problem is the fact you brought sex into the MLP verse, then might I point out they alluded to it in the first place with Pound and Pumpkin Cake

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The Baby Cakes definitely do show how couples do procreate. Perhaps I'll try to bring the idea to another level at some point? I do need to keep the tale of how the other two Ponies with Dragons fit into the entire mix. :)

6381207 glad I was able to help a bit

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