I'm just gonna say this out loud.
This story will be completed just now. Forget the second chapter I'm deleting it.
Also this is gonna be a one shot K?
I'm am very sorry.
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y dude it was good strory (it only needed romance to make it better just saying :( )
keep going i want to see where this gose
You should rewrite the story but take a lot more time with it. The setting for the story is rather interesting it's just that everything went to quickly. You should definitely try again.
did i read this correct or not did you just say that you just deleted a part of the story and are now calling it complete?