Emerald Gears is a 22 year old man that was having a normal life, until he moved to ponyville and met the mane 6. Now that he has a uncureable disease he is now on his deathbed along with the friends he made with over the years. One of them has a secret that no one knows. Not even Emerald.
(humanized ponies, they are humans but they have Equestrian tech and able to use magic and fly)
I would like to thank Fantasia Archsage and ShadowtasticlyShadowDust for editing and proofreading this story I might need you again in the future.
Chapters (1)
So sad
I wish twilight went sort of overboard and tried to bring him back to life... But then that would be creepy 
Hm...I would have expanded upon a few parts that seemed rushed but then again this isn't my story.
you fucking died????? damn killing your own oc? that's like frickin suicide!!!
should it not be applejack?
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Oh shit I messed up.
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It's fixed now
You saw nothing.
3633016 what do you mean i was just saying how i love this story
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Ohh.....
Well thank you
Holy shit you are the same author who wrote "Ponies on Earth and my apartment"??
There I was looking like a fool giving you all this advice for a noobie when you obviously had already learned how to write, and write well. I mean you managed to flesh out Emerald as a character, and present to me who he is, all in one chapter! You also did it all with correct grammar, punctuation, etc. At first I decided to follow you to support a noob, now I know I can follow you in order to read your awesome stories. Bravo!