Next chapter is up! I hope you all enjoy.

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That... was... hot!

Honestly, not enough like this here. I've only ever seen one other author write this subject, and I'd say your portrayal of it is very close to his.

Bravo sir, here's hoping to see more of this out of you! (If you haven't guessed yet, breast/butt expansion and macro are among my favorite fetishes. I'd rank them second and third, respectively)

My only critique is maybe stretch out the process a bit more next time, it seemed just a tad bit too fast to me. Of course, the other author did this too, so what do I know?

Other than that, keep doing whatever it is you do!

3440863 Thanks for the feedback! I'm really glad you enjoyed this latest chapter, although I am now debating if I should leave it as is and move on to another growth story or add another chapter now involving Vinyl since I left room for that route in the story.

As far as more detail is concerned, it is rather difficult to add more and more saucy descriptions at very large sizes without getting repetitive, especially when it's just solo female growth. And, I really did want to go crazy huge this time. But! I'll definitely try to stretch it out more via reactions from the audience, more inner monologue, or just interacting with the shrinking environment. The environment would be tricky for a refined pony like Octavia since she wouldn't immediately go grind a large building just because she is turned on. Grinding her cello makes more sense since it's closer and the vibrations from the sound it creates would be orgasmic to her.

Again, thanks for reading my story and definitely spread the word!

EDIT: Btw, who is this author you are referring to? Is his/her stories already in the Ponies, Big, and Small group?

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Most likely. The author is Nostalgia Shmaltz, and he is a writer of many lesser known/understood fetishes. Some of his first works were giantess/breast expansion, and were extremely similar to what you have here. To be honest, I believe he only wrote three involving breast expansion, and only two of those also included macro. But yes, it is likely those stories, being a year or so old, would be in the group already.

As for how you should continue, that's definitely up to you. I'd personally like to see something akin to a sequel, this time focusing more on Vinyl growing, perhaps leading up to her and Tavi getting together. But of course, it is your story. Take it wherever you wish!

That's all I've to say. Thank you very much for writing this. I hope that you continue writing these fetishes. You do it very well!

3443334 Oh yeah! I remember him. His first two growth stories were fantastic and it's nice to see him to have short clop request runs after his debut

We shall see about a sequel. If it happens, I dunno if I want to add another chapter or just make a new entry. Thanks for the praise. It means a lot for an inexperienced creative writer like me! :)

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Hey, we've all been there.
Frankly, I'm still there myself!

3444031More stories like this! FimFiction needs more! Great job.
P.S. Breast/butt expansion is my guilty pleasure. Don't tell anyone...

3530193 Lol, I know how you feel.

Thanks for the praise! I hope to re-do Chapter 2 before Christmas.

3532555Gud.

3434960 not that i'm complaining, but didn't you go a little bit overboard. I mean 100 BUCKING MILES. Again not that i'm complaining

3541522 Well, go big or go home!

I'm a fan of macro sizes up to the whole planet scale. Beyond that is silly and super hard to describe. When I go to revise Chapter 2, I'll make sure to stretch out the growth process so that even at super huge sizes, it can still be a very erotic and detailed experience.

Once again, wow.

Please excuse me while I go jerk off

Chapter 2 for this story has been updated! Check out the new changes.

3541522 ...So you're complaining about TEN MILES OF TITFLESH? Why?

4794229 like I said I don't even know how long ago, I. Am. Not. Complaining. In my opinion this story is one of the best in the genre out there!

4794285 ...Sounds legit. I mean, who WOULDN'T want to use titflesh as an impromptu bouncy house?

4794297 my thoughts exactly!

4794337 RIGHT?!

Well that was... interesting to say the least. I'll admit that i don't find most of these that great due to the large amount of destruction/death that usually follows these sort of things, but this was surprisingly under control, and therefore, I like it.

I loved this story.

Immeasurable amounts of magical energy coursed through her body, unleashing the final flurry of moans from her mouth. Cum splurged out of her marehood, drenching all nearby city blocks and skyscrapers. The milk from her already gushing tits doubled their output, now covering her entire body and flooding the streets. Thousands of tiny cracks formed in the foundation of Canterlot’s structure, threatening to rip the entire city off the mountain side to it’s doom in the valley below.

Her breasts would have to be 5,000,000 ZZZZZZZZZZ at least, by this point!

I have to say, that certainly was... a thing.

Can I just give it 9 s and call it done?