"Twilight Sparkle, do you have a wish that you would exchange your soul for?"
What would you do if you could have any wish granted that you desired, any wish at all, for the simple and one-time price of your soul? Getting the one thing you want most in the world is most certainly worth it, isn't it? Of course it is.
The year is 2050. The Mane Six are all in their late teens, aged seventeen. They haven't met, and they don't know one another. Yet, their wishes shall intertwine the destinies of the six... for better or for worse.
(A Humanized, MLP twist on Puella Magi Madoka Magica. If you haven't read or watched it, you may as well go look at a plot summary or something of the sort to understand some of the concepts. It'll make everything much easier in the long run. You don't have to- just a suggestion.
Also, this is my first MLP fic, albeit it is humanized, so please bear with me. If anything seems too rushed, or you have constructive criticism, please please please give it!)
Interesting, was a fan of the anime so will have to keep an eye on this one
Hm... I feel as if Rainbow Dash and Applejack should switch places in that cover art...
Potential RariTwi in the future? I can only hope...
Oh no. This is going to be bloody.
Once again, a story I have to read due to my avatar.
This Kyubey seems a bit more forthcoming with information than the canon Kyubey.
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I'm not sure if there will be much to any shipping in this, to be quite honest. :v However, plans do change, and who am I to say already that there won't be any romance?
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Whatever would give you that idea, dear? What could possibly be bloody about wishes and magic?
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Kyubey's the character I'm afraid I'll have the hardest time keeping as canon as possible, simply because of pacing.
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I won't push it, but an open-minded author is a great thing!
Feels a little bit rushed; Twilight seems very accepting of this random critter that just appeared in her bedroom and asks for her soul. Given the Twi we all know and love, I'd figure she'd be more than a little skeptical at first. Also I was a little disappointed that the gem she received wasn't a purple six-pointed star, but maybe you have bigger plans for that down the road,
Of course, none of that is enough to keep me from sticking around to see what happens,
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I had the general idea in my head and I do have to agree it was rushed. I thought that it didn't seem as rushed with what she'd seen of the other mane six, but perhaps it is still a bit too fast.
Thank you for telling me.
Dear Humanized Twilight,
You're an idiot, poor dear. Did you really not even notice when he mentioned your soul?
Signed,
everyone who knows this series
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If the corpses of five dead girls were haunting your mind, and you were told you could stop it from happening, your vision'd be a little cloudy on thinking logically.
Just realized something. Applejack should have been Mami. Blonde hair and no parents...
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While that is true, I think they're more accurately represented by their personalities. Applejack is extremely stubborn, and doesn't like to rely on anypony's help if she's able to handle it herself, much like Sayaka.
Ah, another fellow Madoka fan. I shall keep an eye out here - and get my own Madoka crossover off the ground.
Gotta admit, the pairings in the picture aren't what I had in mind of coming in, but at least you're getting the action going.
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I'm actually just using that picture until I can either make a cover myself or find someone to make one- it isn't at all relevant to story pairings/relations.
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I'm glad you think so.
So far so good, keep it up man i'm enjoying this.
i knew someone would make an pony and madoka crossover sooner or later
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Err, is that good or bad?
Good i like madoka Homura is my fave of the 5 and the Cutest iv been waiting for this to be honest
Ps it says human so i taking twilight and the others are in their equestria girls human form?
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Ahh, no. I'll do some quick sketches later and do a Twilight cover pic so you can get a feel for how they look unu But not EG style, just like normal human type style.
3604642 hmm i see i thought the equestria girls looks would work just change the skin color to be more normal and Bam but as long as they look good and do justice i guess its ok ps i take it you like dark stories since its madoka mixed with MLP
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I do have a fondness for darker stories. uwu
3612631 i see i have a question than see i watch my little pony cuz its funny and i like the characters but the sappy friendship harmony stuff makes me feel
im looking for others like that folks that like the hsow but not a fann of the sappy stuff are you one of them
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Indeed! While I do read the occasional sappy story, I'm not all for them.
3617568eh well close enough i guess some like to read the sapppy stuff to make them feel good but then again i guess it can feel cool not sappy When Optimus Prime makes a speech about teamwork and friend ship it sound AWESOME not sappy
3617568 point is im glad their are others who like MLP but hate the sappy stuff i was afraid it was just me glad i met others
*as a large mass of darkness I appear in the comment section and turn back to normal* phew... I think I lost him... NOW THE HAT IS MINE! (The story which this comment originated from was a pokemon fic about victini.)
*Drives into the comment section in a car that looks like a peach* You know, this is the second time I got away from someone by going to this comment section.
Is the show called Madoka Magicka?
Ay yai yai......As soon as I read the description of the witch, I knew what was going to happen.
Now, I'm wondering if Rarity is going to play the exact same role as Homura, but I'm curious about somethings, but I'll keep it to myself.
I just hope that it doesn't end up happening like in the show, even if it was what Madoka wanted......*sigh*
Its been so long...