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ThunderTempest


Sometimes, I mash my face against a keyboard, and stories come out. Sometimes, they're even good.

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There's a reason why batponies aren't widely known in Equestria...

A submission for EqD's Batpony contest.

Cover artwork was done by this guy.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 9 )

The fuck!?! Still nice..but damn...

Quite a tale there... *shivers*

My only complaint is that Lightning Dust doesn't seem to react much at the end, but that's just me.

It was pretty good until the end, it just felt kind of tacked on and rushed with little impact.

Anyone who makes a batpony fic named after a CCR song gets an insta-read from me. But not yet, it's on the tippy top of my read later list for now.

I didn't expect much from any if these "write off" submissions. This however, was a very pleasant surprise.

Kind of an abrupt ending, but I liked it. Nicely done

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