Oops...I can't do it again
"Well...maybe I can just make it so that...no...."
The four ponies were thinking of a way to get everyone back to normal.
"I know!! How about you wish again, Pinkie?!" Stardust was excited for this idea.
"Celestia's horn! It's...glowing!"
"Okay...I wish that everyone who is babies now isn't babies anymore! Or anywhere in Equestria!" Pinkie Pie closed her eyes.
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"Whoa...what just happened?" Rainbow Dash.
"...Ah had the weirdest dream!..." Applejack.
"It was horrible...I was a...BABY! And I desperately needed a diaper change! Ugh!..." Rarity.
"...And the baby Cakes were older, and my sister was there too..." Fluttershy.
"...I had that dream too!..." Celestia.
Pinkie Pie opened her eyes.
"Where's the parade! And where is Pumpkin? And Pound? And Stardust? I need to see them!" She began to sing:
Equestia is back to normal
Nopony is a baby
Equestria is back to normal
Everything is the way it should be
Fluttershy, you were so adorable
You were oh-so shy, but you were free
But you were not kind to the others
But now everything is the way it should be
Fluttershy joined in:
Equestria is back to normal
Nopony is a baby
Equestria is back to normal
Everything is the way it should be
Applejack and Rainbow Dash, you were the leaders of the pack
Nopony knew what was going on, not even me
You seemed to understand the orders
But now everything is where it should be
Rainbow and Applejack joined as well:
Equestria is back to normal
Nopony is a baby
Equestria is back to normal
Everything is the way it should be
Rarity, you were very picky
Like how you threw a diaper at me
You also loved shiny things
But now everything is where it should be
Rarity also joined:
Equestria is back to normal
Nopony is a baby
Equestria is back to normal
Everything is the way it should be
Celestia and Twilight, you were magical
Celestia made this town back to normal, let her be
Twilight was the calm one
But now everything is where it should beeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
Equestria is back to normal!
Nopony is a baby!
Equestria!
(Equestia!)
Is back to normal!
Everything is the way it should be!!
"Pinkie...the baby Cakes are right here."Twilight pointed to the babies...and they weren't the look they had before.
"What?... I don't understand..." Pinkie just jumped up and said, "Oh, well! Let's start the parade!"
Everypony cheered.
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Wut is this I don't even
Is this even a fic? I can't even tell what this is.
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Wat did i just read?
Um...
No.
The fact that this has 6 thumbs up makes me very, very sad.
The songs didn't even make sense. They didn't rhyme, if they did it was through repetition, they had no meter or rhythm... This whole story is rather fractal-like, in that respect; the songs are accurate representations of the whole thing.
What the @#!#!@ is this? I don't know how this got through moderation!
3410849 Well I'm sorry you are not satisfied and read the authors note that is in the first chapter unless you never look at those that goes everyone
3412171 Can you say that again, please, but comprehensibly?
3412171 i'm sorry but that jumbled section kinda bothered me. i would advise looking into it and spacing out each word intended so as not to cause confusion.
Nope
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There is a difference between a fic and a string of random actions.
3419536 Are you calling my story a string of random actions?
If anybody has some editing tips, post them now, please! I will appreciate it!
(But don't tell me to delete my story)
3410849 the songs were meant for you to make a rhythm
What did you expect a youtube video?
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I tried. When writing a song, you've got to make sure that the number of syllables are the same between lines or it doesn't work, any concept of rhythm falls apart.
3430362 Make it like a parody of a song...
...although some can't be made into a parody...my opinion...
3420240 He is, by the way.
3478515 What? Sorry, what are you even trying to say here?
Very fun story
I don't like the singing parts Mrs.Dust
3670938 Far from it FARRRRRRRRR from it
3670972 Dusk Shine is Twilight Sparkle but a Brony
3671039 No but if she is than your the queen of ugly ponies
3671066 Alright if you don't want me to bully you then leave my pic ALONE
3671099 Well don't compliment anything